Lancqster
This is a really good story with good build up so far. Really looking forward to more chapters.
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Surprisingly Good. I admit that I kinda didn't liked the story first, but the following chapter really got my interest. Although the story little slow it has great potential.Mainly the chakra and the elemental powers. Its fascinating. That's why my expectations for this story is higher as well other works. Good Luck!
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The translation quality is quite good, there was only really one mistake in the first few chapters.But the rest... the story has so many plotholes. MC gets a repair ability from a simulation, in this simulation he acquired it by being upgraded, but only to mid-tier, and when the baron 'finds out' about that ability it's suddenly an ability only known from legends and he has to actually look up what kind of rarity that ability would make the sword, but the guy who buys the sword, some guy even lower in the hierarchy of that world somehow instantly knows about it as that is 'from legends'. Another example: MC simulates his life and still had like 5years(or some such,not sure how long exactly, but definitely more than a year) to live, but a minute after the simulation the guy who uses MC is attacked and MC needs to use an ability he only acquired in the simulation to save the guy wielding him, like what? why could he survive in the simulation but not in RL even though nothing effectively changed? Not gonna bother writing down more. If you don't mind plotholes and a somewhat bland plot you can read it, but if you want to read something actually good, then this is nothing for you.
Ok, it seems it's time for a servant girl to learn to fear her superiors. Really, these synopsis are too short, Webnovel should at least give a link to the original Chinese site.
Honestly I love this novel and I think there should be even more. My boss caught me reading this at work and yelled at me but after I told him what novel he was he even gave me a break to continue
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Really interesting concept! Can't wait to read more! ( Once I get more fast passes that is........ xDKeep up the good work!....?????????
Somehow, the MC reminds me of Steamed Bun Invasion. Whom at the both ends of extreme, a PRO yet a NOOB. A pro in mechanics (character control) and a noob in game technicalities (logistics, utilization of in-game items and other stuff)
This is one of the best books i have read in a very long time! The story, the characters, and the world Feinan are wonderful to behold. Each chapter draws you in more and more. Once this whole novel is complete, I would to be able to get this on paper and add it to my collection!!
Amazing story so far, I read blue phoenix aNd loved it, this story Is turning out to be a Great read. easy to read and follow , good characters and an immersive world. Well done
