"You…"
- "We still have a mission to do"- said Han looking at the painful marks on her wrists and ankles- "are you up to it?"
"Holy shit! F*ck me! That was a normal attack -- and it felt like the Tigerman boss' offensive skill!"
Your imagination is mind bending and character development is very nice. Characters needs some romance ?. Amazing work, definitely worth reading.
The MC should absorb a skill that could enhance his IQ so that he could efficiently and effectively utilize his multiple skills. It's like an idiot who owns every weapons in the world but only knows how to use his fist.
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Awesome story.Some real talent. The characters,the tension,the emotional rollercoaster etc.its all amazingly designed. Cant wait for more to come out
The story is Good, like I did come Purely for the smut with good plot, so far I like the world building but wish the pace would pick a bit, Like I said I love how much smut theirs in there but because I find myself so interested with the plot, I can’t stop myself for being annoyed by the smut for time to time because It’s slows the pace, wish their was more devloppement with the Mc devlopping battle skills then sex skills ( even tho In thIs book the sex skills are crucial to being considered battle skills) , plus I understand It’s Futa but just wish The mc would get into some action with some males u know.
Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version! I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another. Anyhow, let’s get to the review. STORY DEVELOPMENT – ToneOkay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it. Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff. One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers.The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing.Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around. And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories.Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story.Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he.CHARACTERS – MCMC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that? CHARACTERS – Side charas.I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality. It'll probably be okay. Oh yeah, also, Romance~~WORLD-BUILDINGI mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone.MAGIC SYSTEMThe fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well. SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUNDSome things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices. MISCELLANEOUS STUFF-No harem planned.-There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot.-----Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3
The idea is something i would find interesting but the authors refusal to correct simple grammatical errors makes it hard to read and/or follow. The story has a good pace but the worlds background is thrown at you. For some reason the MC seems to often reminisce his worlds history is a way that makes it seem like he just learned everything. The MC is nothing special aka he is the same generic broken dark character from every other grim novel. If you want to waste time or find yourself able to trudge through this grammatical wasteland called a novel give it a try.
All 10000 times novels are TRASH AND I LOVE THEM..........................................................................................
I like the story and also appreciate the writer for the description which was given in the story there are many parts of the story which I like the characters design was good and for now I'm waiting for the next update