very nice story
This one probably is the hottest one out of all ! I can’t believe I only have one book left of this series to read... I love how you in cooperate all the characters from the first book n show how each of them find their mate! Absolutely me of the best !!!
Needs editing and proofreading.
new chapter when?
This book has a lot of grammar errors.
Very tantalizing, I hope Camille and Gavriel have their happy ending. Please keep writing I love this story.
is this book abandoned
I came for the romance but fell in love with the action.
I know that this is my second time reviewing the book, but I just can't help it.
And if author continues with the good writing, I'll definitely be back with another review soon.
it is like paragraph comments are never noticed.
120 chapters 8-4-24
Rating: 3.5-4, Translation: 3.5-4
(My reviews may sound negative, but my format is short on positive comments (avoiding spoilers), and often lists reasons why I didn't give 5 stars.)
Intro: A guy gets hit by a car and reincarnates as an "Intelligent Magic Sword" in a fantasy-RPG world. He has the cheat abilities of floating/flying around on his own, absorbing skills from defeated enemies, and sharing them with his "owner." He meets a 12-year-old cat-girl, and they decide to level up and travel around the world.
Positives: This story contains all the regular elements of an Isekai reincarnation tale, but with a unique twist of reincarnating as a non-human entity. Becoming an inanimate object is a less common concept, making it a fresh idea for many readers. The storytelling is straightforward and focused, avoiding the pitfalls of jumping around too much or having poorly developed plot arcs. The relationship between the intelligent sword and the middle-school-aged cat-girl adds a cute dynamic to the narrative.
Negatives: The scope of the storytelling might be too narrow for some readers, as the secondary main character is a child who doesn't engage in significant world events. Their adventures primarily involve traveling from one town or quest to the next, which can feel slow-paced to some. The introduction, particularly the first 15 chapters, may seem especially slow. The main character's numerous cheat abilities and rapid leveling up might not sit well with all readers. Additionally, the story includes typical Isekai tropes, such as spending an entire arc on a cooking contest, which may not interest everyone.
Other: There is a Light Novel (LN) version of this Web Novel (WN); I'm not sure about the differences between the two. The LN translation is not very far along. The recent translation rate is quite fast, with 2-3 chapters released per week.
Translation: There have been multiple translators, and most are quite good, around a 4 on my scale. However, there is a potential issue with the current translator, who may be taking creative liberties with the translation. For instance, the use of mild profanity has increased, whereas it was almost nonexistent in previous translations.
: This is a somewhat different take on the Isekai genre, featuring a main character who becomes an inanimate object and partners with a cute cat-girl. The story is cute and straightforward, though it has its issues. Despite these, I believe most fans of reincarnation stories will enjoy it; it's close to a 4 on my scale.
The storyline of this novel begins to lose its momentum after around Chapter 100. I've decided to put it on hold for now, but I might revisit it at a later time. The main character's objectives seem to become模糊 after a certain point, and she continually faces mistreatment from her family. However, after some time, her reactions to their behavior seem to dwindle, as she mostly accepts their shortcomings without actively trying to win them over.
Its pretty good overall, but I have to say it leans pretty heavily into "slice of life" occasionally.