I hoped for a more realistic kingdom building, but some of the things the MC does makes it hard to believe in the story. I also dislike the MC personality, but that's personal opinions.
Mc is a slave to the system. Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system. I have read 0 chapters and will never even try this. Mc is a slave to the system.
i really like this book .....i just dont know why can't webnovel select books with good ratings instead of choosing trash like genius system.......so sad that many good books doesn't make it
I was just got hooked because of the trial read, then I found out this one is really different.
something to my taste; a little bit different compared to the typical system-based novels; a new approach and of course thought raising story.
I liked it so far (20chapters). hope it gets picked up later on.
I love this book! So unique! so fun! so cute! I love how the MC isnt going over any girls! No Romance!!!! I love this book so much!!!! My only problem is the updating speed is slow, like 2 updates per week? I mean if the speed of the release of the chapters will affect the quality of the book then it's all good. Thank you for this cute novel!
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This story blew me away. The world building is amazing, Jack is such an enthralling character, and even the side characters are well developed. The power system is unique and this entire story is so good that I am desperately hoping that the author keeps writing, and it gets the attention it deserves.
Please Make mc see again, and make mc strong and domineering not a coward author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And give him a bit of ruthless and coldness
The quality of writing although not the best it makes it up with daily updates. The story although not too deep and unique (as of chapter 9) we have a goal and a basic idea of the world [ better than an average webnovel ]. All said and done I’d say it has great potential and is slowly moving towards its peak.
After I found this book few days ago I've been hooked on it. Sadly my coins and passes were drained on this I was not able to catch up to the releases but everyday I'm getting closer to it. I love this book, my favourite on this app.
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The writing style is mature and orderly... I like how the author developed his characters and how they react to situations in a realistic manner. Just as the author gave the MC a drive or purpose that will help him grow as a character as the story progresses. The world-building is well-thought-out, and the pace is neither too slow nor too fast... It's perfectly balanced.