I'll just skip the positive and get to the point.There point in the plot that are repetitive which could get quite boring, it's like some of the chapters have half of its contents, give or take, basically describing the same thing over and over again. Fight scenes are also not very descriptive imo.Some phrases are also over used like pinching the bridge of the nose or rubbing the temple.As for the male, while amusing, can sometimes be cringey and annoying. I feel like there's no development with his personality. But perhaps that's point to highlight his mischievous nature. But to me it just gets tiring; it was fun at the start. I would to see him get serious more often.
A fantastic start! I'll definitely be reading this daily. This story hooked me instantly, and I just can't stop. Great job, author! 10/10 from me!
"Tangled In Time" is a gripping tale of betrayal, resilience, and empowerment. Azaria’s journey from heartbreak to revenge unfolds with emotional intensity, layered with romance, ambition, and personal growth. As she reclaims her life after a tragic accident and divorce, the story keeps readers hooked with its dynamic twists and complex characters. With themes of love, revenge, and transformation, this novel offers a powerful exploration of a woman rediscovering her strength and worth, making it an unputdownable read for fans of romance and redemption stories.Do well to support the story guys.It's really interesting
Seems interesting so far. Keep doing a good job.
I am at chapter 30 currently. I actually like the story even the pacing is great. Though i got to ask what's with having all that brain power yet he can not do something as simple as analyse situations? e.g. he has the ability to read minds yet he doesn't use it when it matters like when he sits in class, he just watches the moonlight girls do as they please when he can do something about it like seriously how does he just go with the flow till trouble catches up. This is a huge let down especially considering its all females surrounding him. Do respond i seriously want to hear you thought process before i proceed
I had enough patience until chapter 20. It's bad. You can call it "chaos" in one word. The narrative jumps, often ending in nothing. Dumb dialogues between the main character and the system, I don't even know which one is dumber. In general, chaos, chaos, chaos.
Es bastante interesante, es una historia un poco diferente de un mundo inverso y veo que vale la pena leerlo hasta ahora le doy 5 estrellas por un buen comienzo y una escritura impresionante en la trama y sus seguimientos. Aunque acaba de ser publicado tiene mucho potencial. Aunque recomiendo que también hubiera superpoderes más o menos al estilo Boku no hero, pero sin sus super villanos con formas extrañas, puedo ver que si se podría adaptar posteriormente. Lo que no recomiendo y se va a adaptar el enfoque de super poderes es que los poderes sean de orígen público. Eso es todo, por cierto agreguén más masculinidad al mc. Y también agreguen imágenes de referencia de los personajes.
Kya hai sub faltu ka, Land khara nehi ho rahaha, rani ko chodo, tab maja aye,are e banda jise marji chod sakta he, firbhi sala pressure gravity kar raha hai.chutiya.
what is thereto say the story is perfect. the lace moves good and the character development doesn't leave you disappointed. overall I'd say this should be in anyone's top reading list
I'm writing a review only for support. Thanks to the author for his work, I would like more chapters and I ask the author not to repeat the same information 10 times in a row, it’s annoying a a aa. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a. A a a a a a. A. A a a a. A a a. Aa. Aa a. A aa. A. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a a a
Can’t wait for more characters ! Lone Cherry ? Baby !!!!
Well, this is without a doubt a masterpiece. Great story and impressively unique world building/background. And unlike most LN the side characters are not one dimensional and, every one has unique background and other details ,sometimes it's too much details ? but in the long run it will be OK ?. The power system is specially well designed and satisfying . Now to the most important part, The MC . First he is no saint nor evil , he can be both whenever it suits him, otherwise he doesn't care. Ambitious and never settles for mediocrity, which is obvious from the title. Though he was not this way from the start. That's the beauty of it i guess. You will not see much reactions since he has apathetic attitude to almost anything except his own path of power. Though he is not very flexible. Overall its a really good read and won't disappointe. And don't be discouraged at the lack of action in the middle chapters as it's important for story development.