Garbage... You can tell that the Author didn’t want to put any real effort into making this novel.
I gave up after 12 chapters.
Personally, i could rant all day on this novel and still need another week before I reach a point of having nothing left to complain about.
Waste of my time.
Don’t waste yours.
P.S. - You’ll probably find some of my paragraph notes if you decide to read, even after my warning.
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the translation quality is getting worse and worse I'm sure its just machine translation now simple mistakes like he and she are wrong and the protagonist name is wrong a few times so what about the side characters we rarely see the only thing good right now is update stability
It irritates me always curses on things short minded mc does not know how to think almost always over react on thing it's just obnoxious for me.
The cultivation system has a unique twist while at the same time not, I enjoy it a lot. There is no grammatical errors, and the writing is great, I would definitely recommend this book.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow? XXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
raw 功法都有熟练度the story is not bad but get stale for me after 170 chapters. but one thing for sure if this wants to get picked, that is the translation quality has to go up. One week worth? seriously? 一周 usually mean one complete cycle in cultivation term.
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probably one of the best for this trial........................................................................................................
Brilliant work author. Adding a new force huh. In my next life if I'll have to study about this force too, believe me I'll not forget cursing you too. Btw nice to meet Paul, unlike yours my Paul is really in s/m stuff and I can really relate to Julien we think alike especially in football. Anyway about your work, well it's good, I enjoyed, the only complaint from my side is the names of some of the characters, Paul, Julien okay but Alit.... Aldre... see I can't even write those names much less remember or speak. Well it's my problem I think.Anyway, the story is smooth and you have an amazing world building and character designs are pretty good too. There were some grammer issues but since I myself is bad at it so I'm not sure if I can say it's error.All in all a good read and definitely awesome for someone who is into science and for those who are not in science like me, you too should read it, either you'll start loving science or hating it all together. In the end I'll just say dear author please update it more regularly.
ahhhhhhhhh the reason i'm opening webnovel to sign in daily is this piece of art! i love you so much author for making this gem existed.... stay healthy and make sure chapters are updated always alright?