I like this novel but Ray is hypocrite and really, you kill the last of your kind the last dragon for wanting to bring back other Dragons back like WTF zero in MVS was a good leader than this buddy fighting for the return of his people until the last minute. Also for killing humans who are one of a reason for all youre species death you blame him I mean he was young seeing his uncle and aunt dragon dying. Last also uniting with the b*tch Bliss who even was the one to kill you're people. Seeing the last of your kind's bones used for creating weapons and taking his heart for his ability because we're told the shadow power comes from a god slayer and the power originates from krad now what is a great king doing raising children with Sylvia while enjoying a good show. At least it's good novel to read
It’s a Good story so far I’m at 300+ hopefully he gains a new and Concrete goal other than Getting stronger. Like what was the System at the beginning and would he go and Take revenge on the mastermind of his death ? The story is Really intresting and isn’t boring , but It would be better if he had an ultimate goal .maybe not because of his Error characteristics in other words he is like a bug like character so there really might not be that goal.Anyways if there isn’t who am I to say I’m not the author
How have I become addicted to this?
the update is too slow,one chapter each day.it's so boring!
it's not really a novel, it's just someone writing a poem and wasting the readers time with only a few sentences per chapter, and even has locked chapters that are the same thing
Absolutely bussin', I don't know if it's because there is a lack of good one-punch fanfic or what but I like it, and I want more fanfic similar to this.
Face slapping, harem, and not a single person with an iq above the double digits. I dont recommend if you want to keep your sanity.
To be honest, I enjoyed the story at first. But as things went on it started to drift away from its main ideas and fall apart.
The system kinda just isn't relevant(in a bad way) and the main character doesn't utilize it intelligently.
The disciples are all two dimensional and have flat personalities. Nothing interesting about them and they are sidelined too.
By chapter 50, everything afterward is mainly focused on generic face slapping villains who are redundant and just waste time to read about.
Like there's a huge battle going on and the story ignores it in favor of having a conflict with some guy no one cares about for ten chapters. Not even an exaggeration.
Don't recommend reading past chapter 43.
Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.
Besides the constant flash backs and the bro-con vibes it is a great story full of emotion and thought provoking concepts . SO JUST READ IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall O like this book it’s a fun read decent progression speed good world background
Started off pretty interesting to say the least. However, it’s another story where the author interprets dark themes meaning mass sexual assault of women… it’s not an interesting plot point, and quite obviously not enjoyable and yet the descriptions of the actions are decently in detail as if I’m supposed to enjoy it. Within like 5 ch you get introduced to one of the new harem members and the noble that is famous for kidnapping women, physically abusing and assaulting them with vivid detail on how he forces them to use their mouths before tossing them aside. How he wants his servant to go get the husband and brother out of the dungeon so that they are forced to watch…
The women of the story are pretty well thought out, but the rest of the story will give me some new form of ptsd at this rate
Are you alright author?