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I wish I know what will happen in this story am getting more excited to continue ReadingIs not perfect but interested from beginning and also easy to read
I only ask that you read carefully before posting a review, and please don’t just put a negative review because you personally don’t like a certain type of theme, I won’t bother with it. If I can improve on something, I will try, but I am not going to compromise the plot because someone doesn’t like the MC having a personality which they don’t like.
Thanks for reading my novel!
Really big fan of this story so far! It is very well written without too many noticeable mistakes, has an interesting no nonsense MC (with a good excuse for why he would be living in a game world 24/7), and the game world itself is extremely enticing already with plenty of room to grow as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
Idk but really did read so many chapters and now its like its back to square one... was i hallucinating!! Has author deleted the chaps? Why is that?
Alright, so this story is getting better by the day. After the initial issues, inconsistencies in the story (that had been later fixed by the new translator) it is just getting more and more interesting. The magic concepts are not entirely new (which is good because it helps us to relate to it easier) but the application of it is fresh and exciting. It is finally showing the promise for a similar story to WMW and after a hundred chapter or so it is delivering on this promise. So, my advice is don't drop the story until you get to about a hundred or so chapter because it keeps getting more mysterious and exciting. Many thanks for the hard work of translating the story, please keep up the good work.
Light it up.
Those who are in dark books, and emotional crap,
that brings tears to your eyes, you are in for a treat.
This book has mature content so please read-only if you are 18+.
The prologue was especially good, hope you can keep up the good work. I have high expectations from this book.
I didn't really expect much at first, but it turned out to be great. The way you represented the story in the prologue was insane.
Hey, Author here. I’m really happy to see such good comments about my book, and I hope it continues into the future as well. But that’s not what I wrote this review for...If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see. Also, I would love to have those people to come back and read the altered novel again before finally deciding how they feel.Last of all though, to all readers and writers alike, thank you for taking the time to read it. Have fun !
I may be lenient on my review but I truly appreciate the creativity the author had put into this novel overall along with the in-depth descriptions. Although I haven't read many novels, I know a unique story when I see one and this is definitely one of them.Loving the chapters! Keep it up!
a waste of potential it could've been so much more but it's horrid the concept was nice but a merit system?! this is cliche af and frankly i would prefer the mc was evil heck i'd even be fine with good disciples and bad masteroverall rating: not worth my time