Idk why picking this sing-in novel when we have already plenty of this on the site and btw this is one of the worst at least pick something interesting like protect our chief and not this mid novel for mid readers
it's disrespect to my intelligence for me to read this novel alright concept ruined by the writer.
not worth reading
it's time for webnovel to shut down
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Okay, So far im about 15 chapters in. These are short chapters but i don’t hate it. Warning to future readers, author uses “and” a lot so i am guessing english insnt their first language. From what i have read so far I think it is pretty good for what it is.
Slightly slow to start, but genuinely beautiful writing and a very well thought out and intriguing plot line, with an interesting main character. There is very little to bash about this novel, and very few that ive read previously can match it in terms of quality. Highly recommend.
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great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised.Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read.other than that great job author, keep it up
author didn't plan when writing this, keeps pulling ideas randomly and inserts it to push the story forward, so many inconsistencies, 1st chapter got killed by thief didn't take his ring when he died cause blood reasons... few chapters later kills same thief but gets his stuff from thieves ring... and he locked chapters at ch.40 when the story is this bad...
This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review.Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing.Story Development - ★★★★★The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like.Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed.Updating Stability - ★★★★Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity.World Background - ★★★★VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.
Amazing start, I highly recommend reading this, it's only 3 chapters tho this will be good, I wish the Author would post more other than that nothing is wrong with the story but it's too early to judge!!