A really interesting concept. Its like simular to a mix of a few good ones like Regressor novles, iseki, Novel extra. Overal is pretty good so far and look forward too it!
The setting is interesting and I enjoy how the author has chosen to implement the MC’s system. The clean and coherent grammer is a breath of fresh air on the site so that is a major plus.
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Very interesting story. I love how cynical the servant is
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The novel is decent, not amazing, but not bad, but as I read, I kept on noticing multiple inconsistencies, and also, the MC, Max, is actually an idiot, he has no brains, he’s rash, and thinks pretty much only with his sausage. Early on in the chaps, he says after he got cucked by his friend, he only treats others the way he gets treated, but he completely disregards what he said just a few chaps later. Also, I don’t like the fact that he was flirting with his dad’s wife even though his dad is actually a good guy, that cares for him once again disregarding his previous statements. Like bro, your father was one of the only good guys that actually cared for you, and you trying to Ntr him. For me personally, I stopped reading during at that Prince chapter where he just he gets mad, explodes, and doesn’t even think of the consequences. Once again, this is not a bad novel, it’s just average, you could find a novel like this everywhere.
definitely this is infact the most interesting first 3 chapter action novel I'd ever read. The setting blew me off realising its a Nigeria action story, amazing... can't wait for the next chapter
Very interesting start. I would also like to see this continued!
Why does he need to work hard when his dog is broken?
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
As a fan of many authors, and with the respect I have for those who work hard to make their novels readable, I say now that this novel is very unreadable, the author hasn’t bothered to understand how to use the English language properly when writing. Errors everywhere. For those of you who keep up with this l.n. Props to you, you’re seriously a different breed. But for the author I say, read English literature, don’t stick to reading light novels all the time, because in the long run you won’t improve your English writing if you don’t have a solid grasp on the writing technique. Also read English dictionaries. And do free English lessons using an app or the internet. I can tell you’re young so you have a lot of potential. This novel is truly just your start and I hope your writing technique on your next ones will be so good they can’t even be compared to this one. Alright that’s all I wanted to say. And as a brother this novel is trash get better at writing in English bro.?
Does this book have romance or harem? Don't trust the author after reading a bit into abyssal lord and the romance and interactions between mc and Sofia ruining an already shaky novel. If there is gonna be romance at least don't waste ppl's time finding out and add the tag in.