Is it really that hard to put a spoiler tag on a comment spoiling the ending?
this novel is so great yet so underrated.
The only thing I could say is, the narration is like a bolt of lightning. Way too fast and direct, more like an essay rather than a story. In my case, I could barely feel the atmosphere. The situation is throwing you here and there. Less emotions, not that engaging. Maybe, I've been fed up by typical Chinese writing, but this novel's writinh is way too bland.There are plot holes too, but it is common in this genre but the method of narration is really...
Did it have a sequel or a season 2 or is this the end and no continuation will happen?
I don't know why but I haven't been able to get into this book. It's not as interesting as book 1. In book 1 there was the tarot club meetings to look forward to, but here there's nothing of the sort; it's just jumping from one adventure to another. I wouldn't even mind a sort of triangle relationship between Lumain, Franca and Jenna just to spice things up.The way this book is going, at the end Lumain might become stronger than Klein what with him being able to have 2 pathways at the same time. It's probably going to be like Naruto and Boruto all over again, with the author nerfing the person who came first(Naruto/Klein) for the sake of the new person(Boruto/Lumain). I feel Klein deserve way better than that really.Book 3 might even be about another person entirely.
Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't like
Mc transmigrates☑️
finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️
Struggles but fails ☑️
gets a panel\\ golden finger ☑️
ergo the training montage ☑️
gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️
also, he just has characteristics that I don't
Super naive
super kind
super polite and amiable
I mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
Alright, this is a proper review now.. although its still a bit shameless but this time I'll provide some insight about this one.
first and foremost there will be NO HAREM! although he might be a bit of a playboy but there will be no mutual romance in there.. Though he'll meet his FL after some time!
Second, this one of those Lowkey at first and show himself when he strong enough. So expect some long grinding at the start.
there will be lots of fight! and lots of adventure. too the MC will be one of the cautious one.. but he's no genius mc that have everything and everyone dancing on the top of his palm.
and lastly and also hopefully i can execute it well.. but there will be some twist in here. and it'll be a tough ride ahead .
so have fun reading my book!!!
i don't like romance much but with the rewards from the competions I gave it a try and I must say that romance may be my new favorite genre
Slow pace novel. It is lackluster to read.
Overall good potential with poor presentation. The story would be much better with solid editing. The translation (presumably) needs work. A lot of the English feels clunky and flows poorly but it is still reasonably easy to read.
Good idea and spin on kingdom building, despite the typical story arc. Some fresh mechanics. The characters have potential to grow.
This is an okay read but the problem I had is that it is nothing new or different instead of an mc that is trying to do something different we have someone who is praising democracy etc. while doing everything I have already read about already in a different story,
I believe this would have been a much better story if instead of instantly trying to turn the country into a democracy he tried his best to maintain his rights as king. This would have been a much better story than what we got.
It's so boring. It took me days to finish the first chapter. The author also seems to be suffering from a bloody nose, which is likely why his math is so horrible.