An absolute brilliant story, the world background is absolutely genius! It's really well written but I recommend you to have a strong heart... Its not a silly harem story with screaming agape girls
Does any one have the website that i can get the RAW with this. i am honsstly going to use google translate on this and then fix the grammar, i really want to read this novel.
Tbh this is the over all best book I have read, although it is troublesome to read on my phone and not an actual book I decide to still read, simply because I absolutely love this
More more more chapter more more more chapters more more more chapter more more chapter please and nice job
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A GOOD START. I really liked how they made decontamination chambers before you enter or exit anyplace. The sci-fi world setting is also very good. but you need to make it a bit evolved in future coz there are a lot of scientists.
The character design is also very good. The stroy is interesting but too early to write a detailed review so I look forward to your growth.
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I hardly see a synopsis begins with this many questions. It is intriguing and refreshing. The story is also interesting. Please keep going and write more! Good job, author! I enjoy reading it.
Five stars again, just because it's so fucking good. Also, incest is
this is great! very nice! the writing is dope also the story development. character design is cool I like it. please continue this masterpiece
The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one.Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
Having good time reading. I like the family aspect in the story. But then Fire Nation attack the planet and destroy everything. I feel i wasted my time reading all that. I was looking forward about the future. how about that purple guy will do ? What about mc sister? About all of that invention for the common people ?And many more things. Thats why i keep reading. But its gone , destroyed. I don’t know what are the rest of story about, is it interesting? Well what’s the point anyway? Maybe it will be destroyed again? Very meaningless read here. Well Thank you Author for the 550 chapter i read. GG