Pretty good so far NGL.
So opinion of the first 20 chapters is not bad nor good just average and all 20 chapters take place in the span of 2 or 3 days so it is super slow paced and the fact it follows a 3 year old makes it worse
well, allway's the best. if i say in every aspect, the story line and how connect
just......astonising. and well also the way he represent the story itself. kinda also intresting not chit chat and other bla bla you what i mean like some are just way too lenghty they just explain to much the other stuff so.....this is the best i can say about this.....so exccel..
I just want to know... are QI going continue to release the new chapter or not...???
In my opinion, whether QI or WW that translate the story, its fine...
Its just the story is too goood... are QI not going to translate and release the chapter anymore...???
Just give explanation to the issue about copycat or something simillar anyone talking, will you?
Hikss...
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It's alright if you don't mind reading contradictions. The title is bs, he's all abou 't forming a team even before it begins, and he cuts himself as a form of pain resistence training since forever...
He also apparently had dreams about the apocalypse and didn't do Jack to prepare other than cutting himself.
Flashbacks are poorly indicated if at all.
Its an alright read if you don't mind feeling you read a poorly translated wuxia novel with great grammar and western names.
That said, that's only up until it gets monitized and if there really isn't anything else to read. Its like listening to a little kid spewing off his fantasies about how this and that character he imagines is better because if yours does this, his will have a special item or prep to do that, and then when you bring the slightest Incling of logic into play, not even pragmatism but simply, I thought you said he is this and that, then obviously he's that too but the new and better thing more so.
Get it? There's no lasting definition in anything. First chapter paints him as some sort of bullied unfortunate self destructive lonely emo kid that can see the future, and the next he's calling his friends, mostly girls to get away from the windows cuz the sun is bad and takes of his mystical glasses of a clear stone that blocks his future sight abilities that he found as a kid cuz else he be like cyclops with his lazer beams so he needs tha mystical glasses to block his future sight...
Ya get it? No? Exactly. That's what the story is like.
It's kinda catchy and interesting, I highly recommend it
Read and thank me later
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
Author, I must've hit the jackpot today because your story is AMAZING!
My only problem is, why haven't you hit a 1000 views yet ?! The writing is amazing and the plot is really, really interesting, gives me nostalgia. I love this, DO NOT ABANDON IT OR I WILL FIND YOU IN YOUR SLEEP!
The other problem is long paragraphs. Divide them into two or three parts and you'll be fine!
If you want to publish Indian novel use Ramayana, Mahabharata..etc like puranik stories. there will be no copy write issue
Don't stop the story, I need moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar Chapters LOL, I cant wait.this story is good everyone please give it a try.