I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father.
This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!
synopsis is good. hopefull the story would be as well. lets see what happens. Looking forward to read this one.filling the wordsfilling yhe words.
A shameless review and a proper review to post since the novel has reached 100 chapters. So, I would like to establish some thoughts about what you should expect from these 100 chapters.- My writing was decent, and at the beginning of the novel, it was kind of unstable since I was still trying to play with my words. And my style at that phase was not actually accepted by the mass, so I changed it slowly. I can't tell if my writing has improved since it is hard to self-edit since I can't notice my mistakes. Should I hire an editor? It would be impossible since I don't have money and don't have much time to send plenty of chapters to an editor.- The story wasn't established as I wanted to show that the MC was aimless, or rather doesn't have a specific goal to stay except going to the Immortal Heaven where immortals live. It was kind of messy, I agree since all of the encounters the MC had weren't that long. But along with it, after chapters 50 and above, there will be some sign of the plot. And truth be told, the plot was too slow.- Long side stories to make the world background more introduced. But not to the point that it won't be connected with the MC. All of the side stories were made for the plot and a path for the MC's journey.- The character design was a bit off, you may say. He is an immortal sage but still acts like a kid? Well, it will be for character development and part of the plot and discussions about the MC. [May contain spoiler] MC had abilities sealed, but some were activated every time. One of the examples is the Absorption Body, which works with mana and Qi, and I am saying that he also has mind abilities. Let's say that there were some side effects that he still didn't notice as he didn't pay much attention to them since it was natural for him at this point. And I'll mention that in these 100 chapters, only once or twice is his personality pointed out, so in the future chapters you will learn more about the MC.- What to expect in these 100 chapters might have been mentioned but I am getting excited with the world background and the MC's background story. Proper background story to understand the MC more.- The cultivation part, well, the Heaven where the MC was, is the weakest of them all. So, I am telling you that in the upper heavens, you will see what cultivation is. There were mystical arts, and some strong techniques, so expect more when the MC lays his feet on the upper heavens.So, my style wasn't really acceptable and not that good since I started messing up with the readers' thoughts. I also did that with my other work and have still not learned since it comes naturally. So, if it is tolerable, thank you for staying with me.
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Looking at the story objectively it is really good. But for some reason I just can't get into it. Not sure if I'm just not in the mood for this story, or what, but it just doesn't grab me and force me to read until there is nothing left to read like other stories.
I suggest that you should move this to fanfic section -> Anime, as you'll get multiple the views over there.on this section even good novels won't get known...
A very interesting book with an original,well-constructed idea and a flow with a steady pace. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys reading novels about technology and games,with a hint of romance. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious
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Despite a couple of grammatical errors the story is very well-written with a steady flow. The first few chapters are built in a realistic manner with action that is slowly building up. Overall,a very good job and congratulations to the author. Keiep it up.
This surprised me. The writing and story were far better than expected. My reading got interrupted and I forgot to save the novel into my library, so I had to go trawling, trying to remember the name and find the novel again. Worth the effort.
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