pangyboi
've read this story up till the end. I've gotta say, it's good. it's a top tier webnovel story, and worth a read. it's about an mc trying reach the top of a virtual world with an undead legion. the mc starts from nothing, and manages to reach great heights, but it's all due to his efforts (and some luck, of course). he didn't gain some stupid generic system or hidden powers.
he also does not act or feel like a soreborn loser, and there are not harems of course. not only this is a game that feels real, it being just a facet of a virtual reality doesn't mean it'll be less... it manages not to disconnect with the real world and keep it's edge at the same time. unlike some other novels with virtual reality themes that makes reality part seems like a different story, and an unpleasant wake up call from a pleasant dream and another competently written story. the reality part manages to complement everything without ruining it even remotely. the combat is exciting and well written. it being on a virtual world doesn't mean it's not exhilarating at all. since the character would lose almost all of his potential benefits on a single loss... the author somehow also manages to make almost every battle a 'stake it all' fight. which is amazingly competent. as for the characters, they are interesting at least. yes, it's good. yes, you should read it.
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Hasnt this novel already been on pilot reads? Its just a different name. Anyways, Cool concept but seems boring. might just be cuz im bored rn
I hope one day we have a novel and it’s short name is THOT. That would be so funny.
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Honest review here! I actually enjoyed reading it ehehehhe~
Well first, the writing is amazing, it's smooth and easy to follow :3 I like to imagine the scene happening as I read hueheheh
For update stability, full stars since I know writing needs a lot of effort, and it's not that easy to always update everyday eheheh
And about story, although some might complain that the pacing is slow, but well in my opinion, the daily life adds extra layers to the character. Like we can learn how they think and act that way, which I like. And even though it's not jam-packed with actions and what-not, we can still clearly see where the plot is going, so i kinda like it still :3
For characters though, not much to say from meee, because I personally care more about the personality and how they act, compared to how they look. That being said, even though I prefer the side characters more because the MC is ahem, maybe spoiler-ish idk, pretty perverted. That's only my opinion, but in a way, that's good because it's more humane to have flaws, and flaws are characteristics, too. I look forward to seeing more flaws since right now he's being portrayed as a genius hard-worker who got the highest score and a good sum of money and a deep-thinker, while his flaw right now is just... Perversion? The thing that kinda made me wonder, though, is that sometimes the MC acts weird, but that's probably going to be explained later. Like how he was sooo desperate to chase after the thief because that game was extremely important to him, but then stopped to listen to the thief's story. I mean, sometimes people do that, but when you're at a risk of getting something extremely important to you, i think most people would just leave rather than risk getting sneak attacked or ambushed by the thief's friends, idk? Prolly I'm just being picky ahahaha--
World background is pretty okay, it's a virtual reality game and it's exciting, but I think I still need to read more to fully understand it ehehehe since I haven't read too much, and so far I think it's just like, well, a VR game :3
Great work, author~
Author, I'm begging you please write a chapter. This is so good and has so much potential. I was so excited to see them do the photoshoot and him doing tournaments. Also, his streaming would've been fun.
shameless author review i will try and post one chapter a day and make sure the quality's good please correct me on spelling grammar please just give me criticism to help me improve my writing.
Thank you
Woah, this unique writing is intriguing and captures the reader's attention.
This should be in your collection and a MUST read novel at all cost.
Wow!!
Super nice story line with a good MC..
Can't wait for more.
Super recomended fantasy with a few love story I guess
Really like it. Thubs up
I give this book one hundred stars! There is a nice plot and interesting scene. I can't wait to find out what happen next!!! Keep it up!!!
WOahhhhh I really like the premise of this novel and the world building so far. I look forward to learning about the main character and how he will grow. The main character seems deeper than a simple cut out of an isekai character, and I like that a lot.
The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
