Not read this on here but another site. I love these sorts It is mainly focused on business which is great,
The other aspects of MCs life are decent and show depth
Downsides to this I have a few
1 MC was married but within weeks of rebirth desided to peruse romantically someone he didn't remember growing up with, I find this very weak
2 MC not only prevents the one he Perseus from makeing friends with guys but rapes her (she said no but he ****ed her multiplying times that is rape)
3 MC loses backbone when it comes to drinking with Russian, if he doesn't want to drink just say no and not say if it's ok not to
4 after getting drunk he rapes a CHILD ( person was underage, and said she tried to leave but he wouldn't let her)
5 even though I. Relationship MC thinks it's smart to hookup with wife from past life
6 MC continues relationship with child
7 it is translated from Chinese who knows what other **** ups the original pedo author had MC do
Improvements
1Have had MC Persue wife after rebirth instead of fucking about
2 have MC have backbone
3 no child fucking (part where he helped her first time was fine)
Actually This novel is not a bad or outright ****y , it's just that this novel doesn't have anything new . Some Godking die by betrayal then swears to kill , reincarnated , underestimated , stuck up arrogant young master, face slapping and repeat . Old things in new package , that's your cultivation novel in nutshell.
The main problem I have with this story is that it's incredibly slow. Web-novels are usually exciting with action and fun, but reading this has been a major slog. Would not recommend.
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I would love it if only the MC was an adult.Instead of a(literally impossible)baby
here Bolcurut, desu. This novel has a slow plot and a backward plot. So, don't be surprised if, in volume 1, the main character hasn't started playing the game yet. Thank you for your attention.
I can sense nationalism 10s of chapter aways just cuz of supernatural+modern china setting.But I'm still going to read it until it reach that point Cuz This is Really interesting So far.
Ótima história, descrição dos acontecimentos incríveisA velocidade de progressão do personagem e meio lenta mas adiciona um chame a históriaPoderia ter uma taxa de lançamento maior