Shit wifey pregnant too
This is so stupid his father get injured and needs surgery whynot use her fram spring water to heal his father where is ne fmc brain. When she got injured in the frist chapters her spring water healed her
is there such stupid thing.? not reading anymore
OH MY MAMA, I'M JUST IN LIKE WHAT, CHAPTER 64 AND I'M ALREADY SQUEALING!!!! AAAAAA BOTH OF THEM ARE WAY TOO SWEET
I am at chapter 1 but it is so amezing need to read more though but I alr like it from here!
let's stow this away for now, until it got to 100 or so chapters, that way you wouldn't suddenly ran out of chapters whilst craving for more. anyone with me?
This story was catching and has that pulling effect. The piloting chapters were detailed properly, plot setting was in sequence and easy to read. The creator did an excellent job making this story. I do recommend this, a must read.
Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3. Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop. 4. Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable. 5. You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one. 6. So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7. Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8. Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel
The way the words are weaved to form the narrative is one of master weaver. The authors expertise in breathing life into words is one that can be learnt from by most authors including myself.
Writing quality is just
-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story.
-The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks.
-The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything.
-The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class.
-The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist.
-The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills)
-The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing.
-No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal.
In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it.
(And I feel that the novel is written by AI)
Ok, so usually if a novel is going to have inconsistencies it is noticeable at the start. That is not the case with this novel.
Minor Spoilers Ahead (not enough to ruin anything, but enough to give you an idea of the story)
This novel started off explaining how Taku, the MC, is reincarnated and how he is a genius that "conquered" Earth in his previous life and now intends to conquer this new world. At first, he is overwhelmed by the crazy feats the villagers can do, but that is reasonable since even a genius can be amazed at the ability to jump across a village in a single leap. Taku gets his special ability, that all members of the race have, and leaves the village. He does some really cool stuff then goes into training and the novel looks awesome at this point, ch10-15.
Next the author starts world building. He shows a few different perspectives from around the world and each of these side perspectives is that of someone with a special characteristic, so I expect that they will each play an important role in the future. I enjoyed each one of them and expect that the characters would be very entertaining in the future. Overall, so far, the character design is incredible and world building is off to a great start, ch25-30.
Now, the training is over (obviously the MC completed the training). Taku now goes off to do a mission with another trainee.
A bit more side perspectives...
Back to mission. Here is where the first inconsistency really shows up and the story starts its downward spiral. It was stated when Taku was about to start training that he would get 1-on-1 weapons, spear and short-sword, training, for special reasons. Yet, when he goes on this mission he fights with spears and is just swinging it around with no idea how to use it. This is also where you start noticing an inconsistency with the power levels. But that is just a couple small inconsistencies and can be overlooked, ch35.
Then we get another side character perspective. Starting to become a bit bothersome, but hey, we all love when good world-building finally comes together so move on.
Now is when we start noticing that Taku isn't quite the genius he was made out to be and a bit more inconsistency. Taku is a team leader and is on his way, one week out, to meet his team mid-mission, so what does he decide to do? Do some training on the way, quite irresponsible in my opinion. So he meets up with his team and guess what, HE WAS 2 WEEKS LATE! So mid-mission, he decided to take a 2 week detour. So either the author was inconsistent in his writing or Taku is a terrible team leader, ch45.
Then Taku does a couple more foolish things, the power levels are incredibly inconsistent, and the story is in a nose-dive. I expect it to crash hard, with no surivors, very soon. I REALLY liked this novel and lots of potential at the start, but unfortunately I don't expect it to save itself and expect it to lose readers until the author drops it midway.
Author, if you are reading this, I recommend going back to the training and start rewriting. Just fix the inconsistencies and make Taku at least a decent leader or make him at least a semi-soloer. Especially fix the romance thing you have going on. Either let them **** and Taku get it out of his system so he can focus on his goals (my recommendation), or rewrite it out and level off the romance so that it happens at a better time. He states repeatedly that he is a full grown man, but you make him act like a teenager when it comes to his emotions. And fix/better define the power levels. You show that he can barely fight a level 1 beast, but then a few chapters later he is insta-killing level two beasts and fighting level 4s. And if not then start over with a new novel, I think you have a lot of potential as a writer.
Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed the novel at the start and really hope that it can be rewritten somewhat to allow for the world-building and character building, excluding the MC, to show off their potential.
don't mind me i am just here for the yanderes and dont drop it