primodial
Great novel, Really love the character development the writing is great, just the world background is lacking, but I really do love the fresh character it's great, and even amazing. Love to see more chapters.
thanks for the effort and moreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee
Alright here is the first review. I like the book as a whole, but the lack of background of the mc before reincarnate is bugging me. The concept of having 2 person in a body is quite interesting and new for me. I think pace of the story will be quite slow, and it is fine, just hoping the release rate of the chapter will be high hahaha. I wrote this review om chapter 8.
A superb read! Double thumbs up. Highly recommended and I promise you, when you check this novel out, you'll want more chapters. :)) So, join me and read!
I struggle to understand how the translation got so terrible.Why are the chapters behind a paywall so horribly translated, and this is one of the top novels on Webnovel???? Do better
I am droping this novel at chapter 31 i got sick of to much forced romance there i just could not handle it any more the MC is made in good way to be op and the path to make a good novel but it just got too much some thing is bothering me from the start of the novel but it was not MC so im sorry to you the autor but this is my rew! T-T
Good world background, however, could be improved further. The novel is about the strongest business man and in my opinion, it's an interesting concept. Please introduce the worldly politics, ranging from the local goons to a country's bigshots as it would only help alleviate the story even further. All in all, a pretty good story. Keep up the good work. I wish you the best for your future. The novel has a lot of potential :)
This novel is so great! I just don’t get it why it is ranking so low!!? Unacceptable!This novel is so great! I just don’t get it why it is ranking so low!!? Unacceptable!This novel is so great! I just don’t get it why it is ranking so low!!? Unacceptable!
Personally for me, the story is meh.The character design is half-hearted, the world background is vague and the power system is mediocre at most.The tone of the novel just didn't click it with me, guess I'm way too serious for this type of novel.For an average reader who just want a novel to kill time with, this one is meh enough.As for the other readers, I guess they read far too many shitty novels that their quality judgement fell down.
Im going to change my rate when i read the novel im just here early cuz uhmm because the name of the mc turned me off i dont know the meaning of the mc's name but i just dont like it no offense author but im going to read this because i kinda like this kind of story base on the description so see ya later ...
just read any of the other comments on this novel the are probaly 99% accurate
love the story, hopefully you don't drop it
