Primeiramente, fico feliz que seja um brasileiro escrevendo um romance ( que está ficando ótimo, aliás). Por fim, continue com o trabalho, o romance tem futuro caso você continue investindo tempo nele.
Due to some device, someone became a baby again. It is really something intriguing way of rebirth and very creative. The characters are all likable so far. Writing Quality is also top-notch. Stability of Updates, the author seems has a stable update so far. World Background is also done completely well.Great work. Keep up the good work.
The characters are bland and at the end of every chapter is some dumb spoiler. N. N.
up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis. the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W
Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing.Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve. The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them.I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
It's a pretty good book, there's nothing wrong with trying to read this book. Maybe you will like this book after you read itKeep the spirit for the author!
This is a great book. The relationship between characters is truly great and I can’t wait to see how big his family gets by the end. Thanks for the book hopefully more people join me in reading this hidden jewel.
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li qiye domination was quite good in other novel mc fight with old monster our mc is the oldest monster
I am enjoying this novel so far and recommend you continue, Thank You!!! Since I need more characters to post I would like to add that "I like my women the way I like my coffee, bitter(I don't care what color the woman is) and black with a hint of sweetness.
i quite liked this novel................