Great novel everyone should read
Okay so I thought I'd be into this, but as someone who works out this novel really underplays the amount of effort and pain that I go through =p not saying it's bad but I just can't read it cus someone telling you "techniques" doesnt enable you to do pull ups if you havent slowly built up the upper body strength.
The story is good but its machine translated...............................................................................................
I really like this book, lots of potential and also extremely enjoyable. The MC is OP, of course, but he remains careful and doesn’t get arrogant which is extremely refreshing for this type of book. VEry enjoyable, the only down side is that not enough chapters have been written and so you end up waiting a while for each chapter (about 12 to 18 hours) but the longer this book stays on the market the better this will get. Can’t wait to read more!
Tl:dr B- edging into a B. Better then most but still rough around the edges.This is a solid twist on the standard reincarnation cultivation novel. The author's writing is getting better and just about everything from a narrative perspective works just fine.With that said there are some areas which need improvement. The characters and world building are not detailed enough to feel, well... real. The plot moves rather quickly and not enough time is spent to genuinely get to know the characters which are so pivotal to the story. I appreciate that the author isn't padding the word count but more fine details would make the characters stand out from the background.All in all it's a good first novel from this author so expect some rough edges. I recommend that you give this novel a shot and see what happens; it's better then 85% of the stuff out there.
Personally, i think this is unreadable. i know this is face slapping comedy, but you have to turn your brain off to be able to enjoy this.
Just as it was getting good. Hurry and update
this is amazing
nice one. what Lucien did to Elora was terrible. poor thing.
Absolutely lovely
loved this book and the constant excitement
this is a good Life lesson and I really enjoy it. full of humorous and family values down to earth characters.... thanks writer... .........