The narration of this story is so annoying. It feels like when people read books without voice modulation fitting the content. MC makes friends by asking "do you won't to be my friend". There is more but I just don't feel like reading and commenting since im dropping it.I would give this story 1* but author is hard working with chapters and is making this novel free so im giving it 3.8*.
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this story isn't good.YOU SHOULDN'T READ THIS NOVEL. first problem:the translation quality.the translation quality is exceptionally bad. I honestly didn't read something translated like this since almost 10years(grammar errors, repetitive sentences, unclear paragraphs and more) second: the story is not original.you might be thinking at the start of the story "wow so original, he was forgotten by god" or other stuff however this idea has existed long before in other critically acclaimed novels. Specifically "everyone else is a returnee". If I were to be honest about my feeling I would say that this is a mediocre copy of the previously mentioned novel with both poor translation and poor imagination form the author. third: the saving grace?As mentioned in the title of this section, I still think that there's a saving grace in this novel. what is it, you might ask. well here it is : the unfinished state of the "game"this, for me at least, was a saving grace because even if the mc defeated a powerful enemy or solved a difficult puzzle he could get absolutely nothing.furthermore the interaction between the mc fighting in a world very real and the unfinished state of other stuff was most of the time enjoyable. CONCLUSION:Should you read this story?No.Is this story absolutely trash?No, even tho it's bad, unoriginal, badly translated, it can still be enjoyable.I read this story and really enjoyed it who do you think you are to say something like that?Exactly I am nobody except for myself. Certainly not you, this review is ultimately only my point of view on this story. I would still recommend to check out "everyone else is a returnee" if you liked this novel.
Interesting concept but in just few chapter he changed from poor MC who have nothing to MC who think he is above everyone. Also i dont like he throw away his pet so often so the reader dont yave any affection for the pet
At first, this novel has an interesting concept. Thus, I read all the way to 500 plus chapters(after reading here, I go find the raw site and read further). However, because this is an interesting concept, it is very hard to maintain quality. After reading past 500 plus chapters, the storyline is getting old. MC still tries his hardest to lose money in the company but almost always fails. I see a huge flaw in this novel. If MC really wants to lose money so badly, all he has to do is develop his product poorly(barely pass the standard of the system), then put the rest of his money in the promotion of the product. This way, when consumer sees the product advertisement and try it then found out the product sucks, then they will most likely blacklist MC product in the future. Thus, MC will always lose money. Instead, in this novel, MC put a lot of money in product development which ends up having a good quality product, and then he hopes that no one will find it. This kind of thinking of MC causes him to fail every time (it is enjoyable to read this kinda thing at the beginning, but then it's getting old when this kind of situation keeps on repeating itself throughout 500 plus chapters). That is a major flaw, it is very hard to keep this storyline interesting with this kind of concept without making the reader feeling bored because the storyline repeats itself over and over again. Because even I can see how to let MC lost money every time (and I'm not in the gaming or entertainment industry). As said, all he has to do is produce barely passable product(in order to pass the system requirement), then put all his money into advertising the product, it is more likely that his product will have a bad review and lost money as a result. Sum it up, a very interesting idea for this novel, but it is hard to keep the storyline interesting.
Mediocre at best. I dont't know if its the translator or the author, but up to ch.80 there is just a lot of inconsistency between chapter and even paragraph, for example at some point it said MC got 3million silver, while few chapters ahead says he broke, never mentioned spending on anything expensive.Another example says "surprisingly he discovered that something add power, but so small that he didin't realize it. WTF man, he discovered but not realize?Beside all that, this novel just got nothing special on it. Lots of CN out there use repetitive template, but that still a better offer, cause they got something unique and special. This on the other side, doesn't use much repetition, but it just lack something 'addictive' that makes you want to read it again. The fight description is good, very good, but that's it. You skip it and you still understood it.The development of the story just plain, nothing worth mentioning. Even the MC is plain, got no quirk except his hardworking, MC might as well be an NPC.
Literally amazing. Actually realistic and intelligent- The main character uses his system to gauge the world, understand difficulty and make deductions. I find the concept very interesting and it should be at least top 30 on the site given, how bad are the plots some of the novels there have.If this doesn't get picked, I'll revolt.
won't lie the power system in this novel is trash at times you have some of the skills at extreme and then perfection and couple chapters later you say the mc is not at that point yet and the cultivation levels need work I'm confused with it the story it self has potential but it has a lot holding it back.
does the author plan to continue this story? from what I've read so far it has a very interesting plot line. I'd be very interested to continue reading whatever the author puts out there for this story. so far it is very entertaining. LOLPLEASE continue this story. I'd be more than happy to support the continuation of this story if the author continues.
This is one of "THE MOST RACIST" chinese novel that i ever read. Have you read god and devil world? This trash is at another level. Myanmar, Vietnam, Japan, Muslim, even black poeple get "trashy" content in this novel. Its so disgusting. Really, this is Qidian International, not ur fcking chinese Qidian, so stop publishing this kind of racist trash in this site. If you wanna read this trash, beware.
I like the restrained writing style of the author. But beside that... I had to force myself to give this story one more rating star just because i have read so little chapters.Let us just say if there was a ranking of the most unoriginal story then this one would be a serious contender. And that is saying much given the mass produced plastic tropes that this site has accustomed us.
Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.