finally a new guy came into the picture to stir the love story...
Another intriguing, unique, and well written story from this author. I’ll be looking for updates. Meanwhile hope more readers find this!
História maravilhosa, a personagens tem toques interessantes de sensualidade e a narrativa é marcante!!
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wow ang galing!! keep it uo author!
The characters are all exciting! Great job! :)
Can't get enough of it. Update more author.
I enjoyed the read, thanks
I am enjoying this story way too much, totally obsessed ...
In this review, I won't focus on plot holes, characters, or other story-related aspects. This review is solely about the TRANSLATION. Here are some sentences:
- "Kyle said, placing two fingers in the middle of the sword, forming a sword shape to counter the menacing shells."
- "As soon as he spoke, Kyle and the two others broke free from the gravity and floated out, flying off the rooftop into the sky." (From the context, which is minimal in this arc, I assume the "two others" are his enemies.)
- "Her beautiful, cold face, illuminated by the flames, is both captivating and domineering. Even women would be swayed by it. However, she can only maintain this cold demeanor for less than a second, and Lorna finds it difficult to keep up the act." (I have no idea who Lorna is in this story or where she came from. And "she can only maintain this cold demeanor for less than a second" likely refers to her ability mentioned a few sentences earlier.)
These examples were quickly found in one chapter (Chapter 77). This isn't the only chapter with poor translation, but the issue became so frequent that it became unbearable. The translation was better up to Chapter 57 or so.
Me too I don't get why people love this vr sh*t
Legendary Moonlight Sculptor and Hail the King are good