The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Would not recommend this. The MC is just too immature and childish. It has a nice premise but the actual story isn't executed nicely. 1 star.
I don’t quite see how this is more generic than things like The Vampire System or Monarch of Time. I can’t see where the hate is in all honesty. It’s great for a light read. Glad it was picked.
The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator.
A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
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awesome
The novel is amazing. The author has done an amazing job bringing the world to life. The plot and character development in the story has been done to perfection. Great job author
I really like it!
Big fan of League of Legends and the novel is quite fun!!
(I am not toxic btw) lol
Hopefully it got picked!
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Read till the latest chapter and I can confidently say that it truly excites me. The idea is new and the flow is kept clean and precise. No bullsh8 as far as I've read. Makes me anticipate the future chapters.
I tried to read this. I got up to chapter 20 before I couldn't do it any more. The ideas are interesting and has potential. But the writing... and inconsistencies.