Isn't that more or less the initial plot of Boku no Hero Academia? Anyway, it seems that the MC can steal and give to others that would be more transference than stealing might be a mistake.
Best pkmn novel out there.Its hard to adjust but its a masterpiece.Can anyone tell me where i can get trans from ch 1145.It got way too worse there
Overall, the plot is great. It really is entertaining to see Seong-Min grind so easily and there is also a huge anticipation of when he finally breaks out of poverty. The MC got that personality and story you just want to see him succeed. The progress is also okay, but I have to say it is a bit faster than I want. The sentence construction can be improved. But the coherency is there. A lot of readers might get turned by the way it was written, but I think the story itself is worth staying for. For our MC- he's obviously OP in the game and might never find a predicament where he might get challenged fully. I hope events to challenge his abilities in the game appears.
raw chapter pls
I dont really get it, why the pople here give 1 star ratings.
There so many reallly trash trash novels that people give 5 stars and to this one you give 1 star? I dont think that it derserves 1 star.
Story develepment is slow, many cultivation novels are the same.
He has a „system“ not really. He has phone that can help him in many things like, Upgrading his cultivation Manual or saving data.
But he didnt really use it much and he is not OP right now. Wich is good.
I think that Starting from chapter 40-60 he will use it more and more.
But like the title says its the story is not only about mc getting stronger. Its avout whole clan getting stronger.
Until now the story is ok. Not amazing but ok.
I would rate it 8/10. ( Most of the storys here on webnovel are 2/10)
Give it a try guys
You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu
I love the thematic elements and the concept. There are some really interesting first steps here in world building, and I think it sets the stage very well. I am also a big fan of the heroes journey elements here and I can't wait to keep reading it!
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It's a really good novel. A novel that you will know without getting bored. The only shortcoming is that it is short. It's not realistic, but there are almost no novels like this, so I enjoyed it very much. I would be very happy if you continue to write.
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Fellow Daoist, you need to read a few popular chinese, japanese or korean novels with a good english translation to help you with your trouble about english things, my english is bad too.
Good luck and keep learning.
OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.