Intriguing start and a nice reference with Beatrix *Wink* What stands out? The mc! Good job on the char dev and I'm honestly curious to see how he'll evolve. It's a nice book. I hope you'll win this WSA Homie. :)
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These types of books are always worth the time,loved reading it. Waiting for more chapters of this.
One of the best novel on this platform without question.But for new readers, I want to make a organisation for putting seles at her place. ahh truly how much I hate her, she's too annoying and anybody who likes her is a true sadist ig.
The first ten chapters are filled with thrill, excitement and mystery. I wanted to know who was the one helping her to survive! And I love how you portrayed the children's characters. Add more chapters, authornim!!
I love this novel. It made me feel like I am actually reading similarly like Godfather(Best mafia novel). With a twist of magic in the tag, i am hyped for more chaps. keep up!
this is what I like about new gen writers they don't make their mc's look like pitfull ones , either they are smart or they are hardworking, and all of this space world building fascinates me , writer keep making good chapters , the later ones are a delight to read.
keep up writing like this ? the book is really enjoyable
want New chapter. story is good author done really good job in while writing and creating charchter.... i usualy like family drama type but they all are the same in most if novel but the way author tell about mc memories has a nice charm to it...the one thing i think can be improved is the fighting. it was quite simiple but i guess it was just first fight hopefully author dont drop this novel and i am giving 5 star so that you create more i love it..
Get lost in the writing, come out a changed man. One that thinks in terms of warfare, love, and blood. Everything has a cost, and he will unify china, because she wants him to.
it good.What you want more? fine.well for starters it's the first novel to make me spend money on this app/site, second author has a clear goal and strategy when writing it, and even when he makes some mistakes like when MC and a certain FL would reveal each other's names, author just found a way to cover for it no big deal. it good read it!
good work to the author, waiting for more updates