Lies! The MC doesn't have a city. Just some lame smartphone cheat.
let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers.our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around.the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully.the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to.updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday.i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future.all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3
This story really has changed my life. I was on the verge of suicide and I decided to read this one day it changed the way I viewed life and saved me. The comedy is peak and the amount of emotion put into each sentence really shines. I would like to personally thank wavyesper for writing this master piece it truly has changed my life for the better I never knew something could be so peak. Highly recommend this story it is an absolute 11/10. THE ONE PIECE IS REAL!!!
The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.
This novel is very interesting, the story are amazing.
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Hello! I’m from the review swap but what drew me in was your title and description. Let me just take a moment to say ——— WOW! Keep writing! You have a lot of potential
I also like mysterious stories. Good going keep it up..... I am eagerly waiting for 3rd chapter. I know it would be interesting. Having fun reading it.
The first thing that caught my attention was that amazing! Cover, but then I read it and I was even more amazed with the story itself. I like good characters and this story definitely has some amazing characters not to mention I'm a huge fighting junkie when it comes to reading so the martial arts? The perfect touch. Great read!
If you get confused by the synopsisthis is basically a blacksmith novel with a bit of fightning, arrogant young master, ass licking young master and ascending to immortality with his blacksmithing skills
The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I discovered it. Give me a medal and reward please.
Though early to review, the stage for novel is set. It has a big background and if this novel goes on it will even go to intergalactic war. MC and FL are eternal lovers hated by the god realm as FL belongs to devil realm. MC went through 9 rebirths so that they can be free from god realm and start new. Now they are together. Apart from two very few characters are shown. MC and FL belong to dragon family abandoned in some world coz enemies were gonna kill them. An old man adopted them when he found the newborns alone in a hut. We have 2 other children that are royalty and finally a dragon god who messed up a lot in past. MC and FL have good personality matching their past. Currently they are 5 yrs old. A lot of details about past wars are mentioned which led the world as of we know. If the novel continues this is gonna have one epic action with good wars. I guess MC and FL gonna fight against the god realm for all they suffered and meanwhile people might not stomach them coz of their talents. Plus other galaxies might attack again the god realm.So I suggest people to give it a go. All details will be explained again in future if it looks complicated to people according to author.... Keep going author.
Awesome novel, inspired by the lord of mysteries and written by the author of warlock of the Magus world. Awesome novel plz webnovel translate this, ????