This is prolly the best novel to learn about fighting narrations... Holy... if u're not confident about ur fighting narrations then try writing one of these type of novels... U'll came out a master once the novel is complete.
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Love the novel though author please keep on update stability or else it's an 5 star!!! Btw anyone knows more yandere novels???? There ain't any if i search in tho there are some like the conqueror path they don't even have yandere tag like some hidden like it???
One of the coolest Xianxia novels I've read. It's much better the prequel Martial World.
The translation is also excellent!!
Obligatory question?
Is this harem?
MC only thinks with his dick?
A outta nowhere development when our MC suddenly getting laid?
If not, count me in
Interesting idea, but the writing/ editing needs a bunch of work. Everything is choppy and makes it uncomfortable to read. When the author tries to describe things it becomes wordy, description is good, but it needs to make sense and not be so awkward.
interesting so far, but author pay to much atention to the comments up to the point of skipping chapter in a rant, so is to inmature, is very consistent with his relases, there is more need of world background, but is undestable as the history is in his beginings.
5 stars for the tags ..i just can't resist giving 5 stars after looking those tags...
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Seems interesting reading the first chapter.... i will continue reading.
Am new writer i hope you can check my humble writings, it's different genres, give it a try if possible of course. your recommendations are welcomed
name: 网游：我的技能可以无限施放！
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It feels really awkward to read it..
And all characters including mc feels two dimensional with bright colours pianted on them.
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A very cliche novel.
The fight scenes have no details i.e. he killed 50 pigs etc thats it, nothing more. No details of the world or anything. Everything is a summary and follows the usual troupes and cliche scenes.