Ich finde die geschichte soweit gut und hoffe da kommt noch mehr. Ich bin sehr gespannt wie die Geschichte sich noch entwickelt wird. Ich mag auch das die Perspektive mal aus "Oscars" Sicht ist.
Trying best on this chapter,Eventhough there are some spelling mistakes!But i kind of find it Good myselfe lol.It will be hard so support is needed,hope we enjoy what is next!!
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That's another OP MC category on the list. I wonder how OP will MC becomes in the near future since he's pretty OP already. Maybe he'll be the next Saitama's rival in terms of power? you'll never know.
This is absolutely the dumbest thing i have ever read in my life I don't understabd how this idiot of an mc has figured out his maids arent normal yet especially when he was making the perfume dumb mc trash translation everything is terrible
Hi guys this is your author Don here,Sorry for shamelessly writing a review for myselfthis is my first book so the writing quality might be low butill try my best to improve everything related to writing a bookplease bear with me ....oh if you want a story with op mc building a kingdom conquering nearby kingdoms without collecting beauties like trophies this is for you..
Interesting twist of a general gaming novel, could use some more solo MC time as of chapter 20. The character design aswell as world background are very interesting to read about
Soooooooooooo goooooooooooood????????? Love this novel soooooooo much!!! I'm addicted and I just can't get enough? Need more please!??
I started reading this novel due to the daily updates notice, sadly I am dropping it now, while I tolerated a lot in the beginning hoping it would improve sadly it is still as mediocre as ever. 1-2d characters, near total lack of world building, zero romance, a plethora of spelling and word mistakes that makes it seem totally machine translated. In short I advise the author to learn as much as he can from his mistakes, get an editor, then rewrite the whole novel, if he ever wants to actually pick up enough support to finish it.
the dynamic between him and the demoness / anyone else stronger then him is extremely repetetive and anoying. mc is always under someones control bending the knee, acting like a servant. author is refraining from mentioning the cultivation level of these people, presumably so that he can keep this going forever. the sequence of events feels forced. Everyone is looking for trouble with mc for no real reason (it is unclear to me why he is the center of attention at all), and to top it of he is horrible at using his cheat...
Thank you for reading!As of writing this note, I've been writing on this story every day for nearly three months. My head is full of little dragon thoughts. I am so honored to have been gifted so many small stones of power to hoard. (Keeping daily screenshots ❤️)And to each of you who have added it to your library, many thanks!! When I'm running low on energy I think, but I have X many readers for whom I must finish the tale properly! And this number has continued to slowly grow! *thrilled*Eventually I hope to convey the development of adventure, friendship, romance, and artificial intelligence before this story ends.Some of the questions that resulted in my story outline:Being a person doesn't require that you have all your limbs does it? It isn't based on your occupation is it? What color your skin is? Your wings or claws? And is it kidnapping if an AI is stolen?This tale is a descendant of Kiri to Shinkirō, which I began posting here as well a few weeks after beginning this story.