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Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure
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I like the turn of events. I know what youre doing there author. ?Im excited to see whata going to happen next and how theyre life will turn out.
The flow of the story every chapter is amazing and I may have left one star missing because I find the dates a little bit confusing but overall the story is great and I also find the idea as a unique one.
The story itself isn't bad and there are rarely any spelling mistakes, the problem only lies on the character interactions as every time mc interacts with other people it feels forced, and the stories pacing feels rushed but i'd read this rather than another monster integration, great story but has an mtl translation so bad it physically hurts my eyes
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Ok this is one of the best, if not the best monster evolution stories I have read. Flawless writing style, amazing development and whatnot. But what makes this story interesting is the fact that we see the story through the eyes of a monster, not a human disguised as a monster.
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this is a good read. the mc is strong and smart. even if he is a cliche good protagonist iits till good . he know his own weakness and strength other characters gets a chance to shine. its not just about a mc showing his strength
this is a pretty entertaining novel it's just that plot is moving way to slowly
