"Who cares, the value of what my men sent me is incomparable to anything else i have, i'm sure you'll be surprised once you see it yourself."
After running for a few days, that Saint expert caught up. However, a friend of Way who is at the peak of Saint realm came to their rescue.
Since I started reading Chinese translated novels, it's the first time I've seen this setup. At first I thought "are you kidding me
Очень плохой текст, как по качеству так и по наполнению.....................................................................................
I think the story is somewhat very not bad
An amazing read! I enjoyed checking out this novel, had a wild time reading this, do continue author!
I believe I did a decent job with this, but I should be careful not to be overly confident. Overall, I feel it's quite good. I would appreciate it if everyone could leave a comment after each chapter or at least occasionally, so I can understand your thoughts on my story.
At chapter 38, this is by far my favourite webnovel I have ever read thus far. I wish I had more coins to unlock chaps, because I am dying to read further.
The authors premise is solid enough. Character and plot development need work. The writing as a whole is stilted and needs polishing. The writing style seems to point to the authors lack of maturity. I'm sure he or she will be able to weave more coherent tales as they grow as an author. This is not a bad effort though and the novel as a whole is readable unlike others I have read. This author is right on the precipice of being a good writer. It won't hurt to give this story a read. Just know that it is lacking. Especially in character interactions with other characters and the way situations are fleshed out. An example is how the world reacts to the characters return from the seven year dungeon. Another is the interaction between the character and the guild his father helped found.
Book has potential. It seems like it would be a good read in future. Keep up the updates
Not gonna lie this novel needs a lot a lot I mean a lot of improvement from grammar, story construction,character and overall.TBH I just write this novel in one sitting or if am bored without carefully checking it. Well am not expecting this work of mine to be great this is my first written work anyways. Also I hope I can finish this work while am studying. I be gald to make this novel to become my companion in the upcoming years and if i ever make new work it be a improve one. Wish me good luck. (>0) - PeneP.S if your wondering why no yuri even its yuri tag don't worry its be in the future ehehehehe. That tag is a confirmation that ML will have a hardtime winning her heart.(Well she have some complicated history)
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