you HONESTLY have a wonderful book right here? why aren't you updating it? I don't get it?? your're writing is fluent and fluid enough to pull your readers into it, and even the prologue was caused a spark of expectations. the events and chapters so far are well paced with their own mysteries, and I have every reason to believe you could make a truly successful novel from this. a word of advice from a fellow webnovel author; on Webnovel effort pays. consistency is key! if you truly maintained a consistent update you would be featured and your novel would gain more exposure, even a contract offer isn't far off the way i see it. all it need so far is a good book cover, the synopsis and prologue are good to go in my opinion. a nice cover, and your're set.
Nicely written story with a good introduction to the characters and world.
I'm really enjoying the story so far. the world building feels organic and is enjoyable to learn. I totally recommend reading it. Overall a nice easy read.
We have a lot authors doing real good these days, huh! Anyways I really appreciate the style of writing and of course I would love to see more chappies soon.. There are a few mistakes but they don't really count...Dear fellow author you're already doing well.Happy writing!!
The story has a nice premise, the main character is well established and relatable. There are a few flow issues, especially with the internal dialogues, but if you push through the book becomes quite interesting.
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The story is totally awesome. I totally love it. It has a nice storyline and has a good character development. I like how the story focuses more about the mc's development. And i totally ship the mc to the male lead.? all in all he story is totally worth reading for.
The pace of the story is super super slow. The story will be nice in the beginning(upto something like chapter 270) but gets disgusting as it goes on. The the MC also turns into one of those lucky b@stard only found in trash novels. This less than clever MC gets into very very sh*tty situations due to lack of cleverness , proper planning and carefullness but still comes out safe and sound because he is the "lucky b@stard".MC has a lot of plot armour(no more matter what crap he does he will remain the superb). I read upto 600 charpters in the raw and the MC is still not an official wizard. If you want to read this novel because you are a fan of "warlock of the magus world
A good story to read .. it just that its a bit similar to RoTWRTW and Reincarnation of the strongest sword .. but all in all its good ? and has a diff touch to it .. i really like it ??
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good read, but very hard to follow. would suggest getting proofreader to help, way to many errors. but overall good job hopefully you start updating again soon
keep up the great work!!other than the fee errors in grammar, the story has a great first few chapters already.Hope to see you update more when you can as it would be interesting to see where you head with your FF.here is 5 Stars for encouragement.