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the kind of adventure i am searching 4!!
give this novel a chance! i vouch for this!
der are two ML and i am loving both! the two is pretty unique
not to take a jab at the author or anything but whenever i see a novel with 100k+ views but only 14 reviews will all of them being 5star reviews i couldn't help but feel that negative reviews have been deleted, have happened to me before, some people just cant take criticism. they don't understand that veteran readers will identify this anomaly instantly and most of the time skip the novel. anyway although apprehensive i will still give it a try.
Good Novel
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IT'S FINALLY HERE!!!! THANK YOU VAIN!!!!
I was going to check if you were going to put more of your stories here but before I could check SH I checked here first and I was not disappointed. Now time to see mc join the dark side. YES BECOME AN ALMIGHTY BEING THAT IS A TRAP!
Let's hope that author can increase his pace because story's really good and it's pretty boring to wait :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(::(:(:(::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(
I've read berserk and this reminds me a lot of it I can't wait to see what happens next especially when it's as dark as this
ps takeyoshi sensei do us justice with this novel
Wow, this is amazing! From the cover to the story, everything is unique. The author really has a way with words. I love the details and the explanations; the author really did a good job presenting the scenes. Kudos to you. Waiting for more chapters.
Fillers! Fillers! Fillers! to the point of madness. I sort of like this book but also really hate this book. Never seen a story being so blatantly stretched out (maybe there are more out there but I never stuck around long enough to experience it)But I do like the book and it has potential but it could really do without the word salad to meet word count
The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!
I admire your creativity and imagination in writing this short story; I enjoyed the twist and plot; and I got goosebumps while reading it. I hope you write more in the future.
The system is kind of a mess of leveling up could be good but average