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The story has a lot of potential but the bad grammar ruins it,I can understand the fact that english is not your main language but you can have someone proofread and fix your work if possible.
Very interesting so far. I like the video game aspect of the story. However, i am not sure if the world is a game or a real-world with game ability. Maybe it will be shown later.
Pretty good so far. Interesting enough plot and characters. There are only 6 chapters at the time of this review, but the novel does have potential.
Raw Name: 顶级气运，悄悄修炼千年
Status: 390(Ongoing)
It has 200,000 collections, quite popular in Qidian China.
Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels.
while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy.
I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters.
Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.
read up to chapter 122 so I'll tell you what l think
the story is nice and the world building is ok but it feels like the main character have no challenge in the story so l felt like the story is bisically charchter get strong go to place get stronger
Interesting plot. It is good to see regular updates. I prefer mc overpowered. So far the story development is great. And as always narration is the strongest point.
im rooting for bella man. she seems so much more interesting than that charlotte. well charlotte isn't bad either, but please include her some more or else i will actually move over to bellas side
Off brand Path to Power
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the recommendations are all good, do you have any recommendations for fanfic or original martial arts that don't have magic and supernatural elements?
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