Overall Decent concept for a book, however the translation isn’t that great so that killed it for me.
For anyone wondering, I think the novel has the potential to be fantastic. However, the author desparately needs to hire an editor. You can understand what is happening and what the author is describing, but the verbiage and sentence structure is really, really bad.
I couldn't get past chapter 1. If I see the words "Dungeon Core" put together anytime soon, I'm going to kick somebody. The way this is written is so weird, confusing, and childish. If I didn't see A-Z, I would not be sure it was English. I mean, Damn. And not to say the grammar was terrible, it's just... whoever edited or translated this probably doesn't use English that often, speaks often, or is still in High School.That's all I can say.
Damn beautiful concept. We had Vrmmos, We had Mc reincarnating in game worlds as players, We had novels with Mc becoming NPC in a game world with players. But We never had a Mc becoming God of freaking games and creating players. ?? Hats off to the author. The only thing to criticise is how fast the players learn the slangs and the lack of consequences of death for players.
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Has potential but the grammar is so disturbingExample: Zhang Yihan sat up, and turned on the lamp and took a look. There was nothing special on the desk except for the stone he picked upThe stone was walking on his way home after school at night and suddenly hit him from the skyChapter 2-----_- the stone was walking (the hell?)Would have beet better if this was TLed properly..This would easily break through 5m views here.Was this MTLed? I never read MTLed novels before but I think this is it.I thought people were joking when they said MTLed novels can make you suffer when reading but they were right.
If you're looking for a gripping martial arts rebirth story with a female MC then you may need to pass over this one as nothing in it was developed to make a coherent story. The entire novel felt more like an outline with characters and plot that weren't properly fleshed out.
I hope this Novel is good
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I think the quality of this book is really good and I like it I put most of the stuff at 4 star though only cause it's not 100 chapters yet and we'll can't really tell how far this booms gonna go so I will rewrite reveiw as soon as there's more than 100 chapters cause I don't know if this book is gonna last that long I've seen a lot of new booms flip arround chapter 80 or the author discontinued writing but hope you continue and hope the twins get a lot of story and background added to them...
Oh my, well...this is rather awkward. As i was searching for a novel to read, i stumble upon this novel. A very weird novel i say, well i haven't read it yet but surely if it has a lot of chapter were to be added in the near future. I'll read em. That all. Is it 140 character yet?
I’ll will just put this down in one word. Amazing! I love how the story is progressing and expectations that will come to be known of the world as he explores.