Artika family

hi man i really loved how the story was going at first but i really can t get past the 1st chapter the grammar and conjugation is really hard to read/understand and i waste a lot of time correcting it in my mind before passing to the next paragraph. please find an editor(someone who corrects grammar etc) or rewrite them. i guarantee you that a lot of people stopped reading after a few chapters

Overall Decent concept for a book, however the translation isn’t that great so that killed it for me.

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This book is a must read the mystery behind the main character as he lied to not only us and the characters in the story but himself, his Character is well written along with other characters like my boy Renji and my girl Suzune it's a perfect five bro  must read

Write some chapters ?......,...................just using this too fill space...........................................................................................................