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He was perplexed, but he didn't stop it. He guessed that it has something to do with the odd grey strand that he used, but it didn't give him any sort of power.
"Of a love life." Lu Duyi shot back.
Without waiting for them to come to their senses Linley placed his mouth into Tsunade's entrance and started sucking all her juices that were still coming out...
Minutes of burning continued and Silk was barely scraping by and not burning to death, he was resilient but it was getting ridiculous.
It's a short chapter and nothing happened even. The update is slower than the other project from Misty too. I don't think it should be costing 7SS; I might end up dropping this & returning later if it picks up and the reviews better. Anyway, will be back to check later.
This book mainly has contents about starting from scratch.
Love the story, A few grammar errors here and there, but not bad. It is a great new take for a cultivation novel. Not the same old story redone with new characters. Good job, can't wait to read more.
"I know, to be honest, that was a misjudge on my part. I wasn't expecting that we'll face stronger opponents than us. So... this time, I heard that those people we meet on the island will come to the mainland and I don't think we'll be able to win against them with what we have right now. So, this training will not be just a regular one if we want to win against them." I explained.
Chapter 1928 now.I loved the story and still do but I find that after going through ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL (hundreds upon hundreds) of chapters DEDICATED TO THE ONE SCENE (the war) I’m tired of the too many details and drawn out fights that seem to never end with an annoying amount of unnecessary details that the Author seems to LOVE to provide us with. I know that the author probably just wants to provide world building or immersion or whatever… but is it too much to ask that we get straight to the point (aka the main story line with her facing her actual rivals) and not spend 100s of chapters dedicated to a TEST that sets the stage for the main scene? There are authors who have said more with less if you know what I mean. With how far I’ve been I would be absolutely horrified at the PROSPECT of re-reading this story for funzies. Honestly would be a nightmare. Love the story but the plot progression — or over-abundance of details I should say — scares me and I find myself skimming because honestly? Most of these details are not even necessary. You think they are in the moment. But they’re really not. Some people might like the “side plots” (if they can even be called that) but I don’t.Love Ainsley and the characters and where this story is going but we could get their a liiiiiittle faster with some cuts.
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This is book ,that carries so many mysterious happening, it's realistic and feels like a incident happening next door. The plot is making it interesting and the suspense is triggering us to know more
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