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Not a bad story. I enjoyed most of the parts and the pacing was okay.Some sentences could be better with and edit and maybe proofreading can help too. Overall, not a bad read, and hopefully the author would improve it.
Really good read!!Nice detailing and descriptive backgrounds for the scenesI like how the character building was done and even the relationships between the charactersCan’t wait for the next book
I really like this novel and I think the pace with which it develops is good. The plot has me hooked as WELL. Keep it up author. I follow all your novels, thanks for your time and bringing us these stories.
The start is kinda rough but it got a lot of potential just keep writing till the impurities vanished. And don't use so much "He
WHO KEEPS VOTING FOR THESE TYPE OF NOVELS?! Honestly this is getting ridiculous. This whole novel is a mess. The origin of the story is already confusing and unclear. The MC is bland as usual. He suddenly used to be one of the top gamers yet the story contradicts itself and mentions he was librarian hence why he knows so much information. I am done. Please give us a passable novel at least. My expectations has decayed. I only want to read clear somewhat interesting novel. Is that hard to achieve? ???
This novel started great. First 100 or so chapters, it really pulled me in. But after the Endless Sea arc starts, everything starts going downhill. Still, i kept reading hoping that it would get better, yet after mc reaches the Yang family, it just gets worse and worse. After that i could only keep up to chapter 322 which i just couldn't take it anymore. Author just keeps destroying or changing the characters personality to fit the immediate nerrative. They flip around all the time including mc. Author also destroys his worlds rules all the time. He sets a rule, then comes a person who not only break those previously set rules, he practically sh*ts on them. Mc's ruthlessness that we have seen at the start is nowhere to be found anymore. Harem, or if i can even call it that, got too annoying. Mc is like a lover boy going after a single girl, but he is also lusting after others at the same time, yet taking no action whatsoever. They serve no purpose and honestly characters are just so bland. This novel is indeed very bland and quite honestly really annoying to read. I was expecting something good, then it turned into something avarage and lastly it just turned into a chore to read. Sad really, feels like author got lost very quickly. This novel had alot of potential, very unfortunate that author couldn't follow up...
a good story. only thing is the MC hides too much,is too playfull and is too used to playing the pig to eat the tiger. he is not ruthless enough or straight forward. he wants people to dig their own grave.
Just came here to remind everyone this is a reupload and what this novels 2nd or 3rd attempt at existing because of rampant racism and NTR where the protagonists lover gets raped repeatedly and he can’t stop it or doesn’t. This novel is translated poorly compared to the first iteration It’s filler is bad and there is low progression in chapters so it’s expensive to pay for This novel is mild trash that deserves 3 stars except for its a reupload that deleted around 170 bad reviews when it was fresh to try and make sure people wanted to read it I rated this novel 3 stars, because well, it’s not worth more but it was deleted so it deserves 1 Star forever in my heart
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