Me hhh
wtf????
This is lit! I can't explain how good the first three chapters are, but don't worry, I'll update you guys as I keep on reading
so far seems pretty good.. lots of potential..
This is really bad.
1. He returned back 10 years in time. He decided to make everything in his life better. How you say? By playing a game ofc xDD.
2. A game that just came out somehow overthrows multitudes of other VR games just by existing.
3. The only game I know to let users run for 8 hours to travel instead of adding a feature that transports players from town to town instantly, city to city or however the developer wants it. If that's not a sh8y game I don't know what is.
4. What game would require 3 times the size of earth? It's not like every single one of us would play that game right? Did we people somehow remove poverty by 2129 so even people considered poor there have VR machines? That's a nice world to live in, tell me about it.
5. Level 0 monsters give out 3 exp. Leveling from 0-1 requires 1000 exp. Quests exist but for some reason there are so few of them in the game when it's supposed to be expected that quest demand is astronomical upon launch. Now if you'll excuse me, I still have to kill 334 lvl 0 monsters to lvl up. (or more if I'm in a party)
6. He's very lucky that it made him get an item with higher stats than it was supposed to before in his previous life. His luck is really heaven defying that author had to use his Trump card "lucky friend Blackie" so it won't look unnatural.
7. Zhao Yueru.
8. Several companies invested their resources in a game that just started. I don't know why they did, don't ask me.
9. There are several wars stated that had been initiated with thousands of players which coincides with point number 3 and 4. If there is no way to travel fast and the world is so big, then how??? There is the mentioned scrolls of teleportation but it's also said to be very important, everyone has it then? Idk man.
10. The time inside the game flow slower than reality, it's also possible to play while sleeping. So this game must be called Lucid Dreaming Online! Jokes aside, it's really detrimental for the brain to not rest, sleeping is not only for the body. So this game is only possible in theory, the author should have mentioned something to let me suspend my disbelief smh.
11. In addition to point 10, if it really is possible for the brain to work tirelessly even hypothetically, then surely the dedicated who play for the whole and only stop for a piss or eat will surely have an edge right? No they don't, this is so sad Alexa play despacito 2.
Ok I'll stop.
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Such a bad story. I started reading it because I wanted to complete the 20 mission for the free FP and regretted it right away. I just set my phone down and tapped it occasionally to satisfy the condition for the FP. May it never be ready by anyone again...
A novel about superpowered cats done poorly, it's a pain to see such a good concept go to waste. With a doormat as the main protagonist and a bunch of cats hanging around, this novel will end up as a disappointment if you care to remember any events or details. Often contradicting themselves, the author seems to have the memory of a housefly, as in it dies every few days. This is not helped by the rather mediocre translation quality. Speakers are not clear at times and names are mixed up, leading to a confusing experience. A total disappointment.
Fml’s family disrespecting mc and the mc allowing it to happen. CHECK
Mc face slapping at fml class reunion and karaoke. Check
Mc being up fml butt. Check
Mc shows fml how capable his background is multiple times but she still doesn’ use his help. Check
All the cliche that a Chinese novels has is in here but all stuffed into 40 chapters
StatsGuy... Where are you buddy? we need enlightenment. we need guidance. we need YOU!... even your stat disciple has also gone missing. dont tell me/us that you have gone on a secluded cultivation to breakthrough a bottleneck? or are you cursed by some demon king? or purged by some so-called hero? have you gone on an adventure to save the princess? are you trying to hide from the assassins sent by the emperor? or are you gathering intelligence from all those heretic / rebel cults? have you found the treasure that could have the humanity? or have you opened a chest that spreads plague and trying to contain it? have you been researching on new technique ? or teaching skills to your disciple? or are you resurrected in an ancient world? got sucked in a game you are playing? Dude, earth may not need you nor our country nor my dying neighbor, but power bestowed by the stones needs to be responsibly put in use. And your wisdom is our only way to know the right path. And also, We need YOU because our ENERGY STONES only replenish after 24 hours
English is not my mother languaje but here we go, i hope its readable.
This is a novel that could have gone big, but became bad.
The world in itself seems interesting but...
I can understand that you want to make an OP mc. Okey good, but if you do it, do it with logic.
Make a progression so the readers can enjoy how he gets OP. The way is done here is too fast, no development at old. Feels rushed.
Many cliches used in a bad way, it feels forced and boring.
The mc is supposed to be reincarnated from an old man, i cant feel any maturity in his way of thinking.
Even with all this issues i congratulate the author for keep going with the novel.
Its not my cup but if you enjoy it keep going.