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Do you feel bored reading cultivation novelsDo you feel f*ckd up system novelsIf you had enough of the BS .This is the best novel for you.Let's take a break and relax reading exciting novel this is .
So far a very good novel. The main character is not stupid or narcissistic thinking he can do it all himself. He understands that if things are gonna go better this time around then he will have to work with others. Side characters are actually interesting and are more to them than just a plot point. Writing is very good. Compaired to some of the other works im used to its kinda weird reading something that i dont have to auto correct what i read.
The plot is terribly simplistic. The MC wants something, he gets it. If the MC needs money to pay for his land, he'll get it the next day. If he finds a girl attractive, she falls in love with him when he says "hello" just like that.As far as I can tell, there's no explanation of where the system came from. It just appears. Is it because he dove in the river trying to save someone? Or maybe because he tried cultivating land for 3 years? No clue. Also, despite it's name of "Pharmacist system" it's just to help grow plants so far, some of which have medicinal properties, but mostly just taste good.The translation/editing also needs work. Especially, as so many others have already said, the system dialogue that is not differentiated in any way. Bolding or italicizing it would solve this easily. As it stands it's really annoying.
I think you could improve a bit by looking at other people's writing and then comparing your weak spots to their strong points. But anyways, please make the mc have a lightning fire quirk, so that endeavour is licking his boots and also that he meets deku and bakugo early on.
Liked the characters of the previous realm. Hope they meet the sect master soon...................................................................
Author please write and update daily I already bought and read all the previlage chapters. I love the story I want you to continue it don't put book in hitaus
disappointing, the mc is a classic return back to the past with a cheat, yet somehow with his experience he was unable to utilize his advantage. sandwiched between the idea of being discreet, yet at the same time losing his shit over arguments with children.The FaceSlapping was not at all cool, the mysterious attitude did not attract curiosity, and most of all the MC didnt seem like he had any plan of how to proceed with his growth even with all his knowledge.
If you stop writing this novel, I'll come and find you and torture you till you start writing again, do you hear me @DaoistZenFeng? don't test my patience lol, just kidding, the story is good and I like it, don't drop it.
please update
Hello everyone! Thanks for reading! I’m working on today’s update, it’ll drop soon. ...
Absolutely Love this story! Thank you Author♡♡