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Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.
Well the story is going pretty smoothly. I recently started reading and stumbled here while searching Sherlock Holmes to read. It's my 1st reading Mystery and Sherlock Holmes so I don't know what to expect and what makes a good mystery story but I enjoyed it so far.Please release next chapters ASAP.As for the review, I like the story but I'm not really getting that much of a mysterious vibe from the story yet. I would like if you can describe the atmosphere a little more (But don't over do it ,otherwise it will be boring).As it is the 'last case' you did a great job not describing the characters too much as everybody reading the novel already knows the characters pretty well.In the end, I just started reading mystery recently so I'm not any expert, I just gave my honest opinion. So whether to take it seriously or not is up to you. :)
What a great story........ ?i really enjoyed reading this....... i love the plot of this book......keep up the good job darkswan?❤ i'm looking forward for more chapters
Always a refreshingly fine tuned translator and awesome content...always a pleasure to read...rebirth novel at its finest i must say!! Highly recommend this novel to anyone new to webnovel looking for a nice read!!
Overall, currently a short story that has potential, I would definitely read more if any chapters were available but currently the author hasn't updated in a while. Maybe if you read it and add it your list he might? (I gave full 5 stars so it gets more attention)
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This was a fun and light-hearted novel that doesn’t take itself too seriously. If you’re a fan of action, RPG elements, and an overpowered MC, well this could be the title for you. It hits all the sweet spots of current popular genres on this platform.With that being said, there are a lot of things that had me confused about this novel. For one it has xuanhuan elements which are Chinese in origin but the characters have either western or fantasy names and the author also used Japanese style of address (incorrectly!) in certain instances. Later on in the novel, loose western-elements are mixed in as well in a way that’s not extremely convincing. The setting, in general, is confusing and needs a bit more introducing and explaining. On top of this, the characters are not written in a very believable way, and I could not for the life of me imagine any of them as adults and they are one-dimensional to boot. The author has some odd choices of words and sentence structures which leads me to believe that English might not be his first language. Though in general, the book is still easy to understand.
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Good concept but...drop after chapter 8I'm tired of MC who kills everyone who direspects him... scenario levels 0..And why a random chinese become a murderer cultivator.I prefere to see mc help step by step some "mc/heros" and create a team/sect with a lots people who owes him.
good story.......... recommended
So this is kind of similar to The King's Avatar. We got our MC who made a promise to stop playing a certain MOBA if he lost and he did so he moved onto another MOBA which is League of Legends. He is great at it and that's all there really is to it rn. I mean there are some interesting characters, but they haven't really been fleshed out yet. BTW MC is in highschool 3rd year which means that he is going to a university next year. There is some conflict with his parents about his love for gaming, but I don't think it will be a plot point. Based on summary it seems like he will become a professional gamer for League. Any it was a fun read, but nothing really special. It took about 10 chapters to cover one match of league when it was being focused on so these 22 chapters should give a good dose of what to expect from the story.