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You shouldn’t Have c*cked the MC…story was going great until you made that Annie be f*cked by someone els…You’ve lost this reader
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
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Okay so let me just say this: the airport scene is the single most devastating plot point in these seven chapters and I am still not over it. Song Ruannin sees Zhai Yu smiling at Bai Yuwei, and she doesn't even approach. She just turns away. And then her sister calls and she collapses on the airport floor. That sequence is PERFECT storytelling - it's not melodramatic because it's understated. She doesn't scream or cry out loud. She just crouches and hugs her head. The plot doesn't need to shout to hurt. And then the car accident happens two paragraphs later. I know, I know - it's a classic trope, but the author executes it with such economy. No drawn-out drama, just: she was distracted, there was a sharp turn, and then Song Zhirou is in a coma and Song Ruannin loses her baby. The plot moves fast here, almost cruelly fast, and that's what makes it work. It mirrors how real tragedy hits - all at once, no warning. The structure of these chapters is also interesting. We open with a reunion scene that's supposed to be tense, but the real tension comes from what we learn in flashbacks. The author withholds information deliberately - we don't know about the accident until Chapter 2, we don't know the full backstory of why Zhai Yu and Song Ruannin broke up until we see the airport moment. It's a reverse chronology of emotional revelation that keeps you turning pages. One thing that bothered me slightly: the rumor about the two Song sisters fighting over the same man feels a bit convenient, like the plot is setting up a misunderstanding that hasn't been properly earned yet. But I'll keep reading to see if it pays off.
It is your typical trash story!!!10/10 plz give moar chapsIt is vrmmorpg so it automatically gets 4/5 stars and I haven’t noticed any large problems yet so 5/5
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Am giving one star review because qidian blocked my previous review because it was negative review with 3 start. Is qidian trying to increase the review rating for the qidian novels by blocking all negative comments and bad reviews? Btw this novel one of the worst beginning , hopefully it get better .
Just because of all those petty people that are dissatisfied that their novel wasn't the one to come out... This isn't such a bad novel that it deserves one star, especially when you haven't read it and only mark it so out of spite. Just wait another week if your novel hasn't come out yet, the world doesn't revolve around you, more people just wanted to read this novel. So suck it up and don't give rating just because of dissatisfaction.
generic novel with mc who lives to drink.mc is uncivilized and naive , which is understandable due to the lack of experience and knowledge.The story is very slow and updates are not regular and most of it has only 200 chapters which means it's in a development stage .Better to wait and see when chapters reach more than 500 the read.
Most people are probably going to think of the legendary mechanic but its pretty much nothing like that. MC transmigrated into a different world(not a game world) with a system. He absorbs herbs to gain points and uses those points to create mechanical soldiers. His cheat is giga OP and I see no harem or romance so far.
the synopsis calls the MC Jason. but never in the story is that name used. the MC is named Yang. his system if you can even call it that doesnt really do anything except give him amazing luck. there is no mention of the system after the 3rd chapter