The story development is utterly slow. The character is too flawed and unrelatable. If you made him a bit smarter this could work out. Without his cheat I can see him dying from tripping on a branch. Yeah i know this comes with character development. But from what I see he lacks self preservation. Buying useless skills instead of something that could help him adapt to his situation and new found power. He doest even have a sense of urgency. When all he cares about is internet and hot springs thats clearly a bad sign. The only good part is your superb writing and fast update speed.
Here's an updated review copy and pasted from my forum post to persuade others to read this:Plot summary:Xiang Kun is a 30 year old programmer who recently lost his job because his company went bankrupt. After a long night of drinking, he blacks out and wakes up 2 days later in his apartment feeling... different. After visiting the hospital and determining he's fine, a weird series of events start to happen. First his all his teeth come out, and brand new ones start to grow back in their place, all his hair falls out, and all his skin peels off as though he's a snake going through shedding. He also determines that he is slightly stronger, and has better senses, and he no longer craves food. In fact, he vomits whenever he tries to eat. He's worried a lot at first, and thinks he's contracted a serious illness, but I'm all sure us readers know; he's become a vampire.Things I like about the novel: The MC is very intelligent. As soon as the changes start to happen to him, he starts logging every single change, whether its obvious things like how far he can see/hear, experimenting to see what foods he can stomach more, even though in the end they still make him vomit, to his weight, his mental stability, and his sleeping patterns. He even sets up cameras to record himself and save for his log of experimentation, like recording himself drinking blood, cutting himself to see if he regenerates, and sometimes recording himself sleeping to record his own sleeping habits. He goes through his whole change very scientifically, and I really enjoy it as this isn't something you see often in novels. All the characters, while not fully realistically fleshed out; they are a lot better developed than most other novels. There hasn't been one 'young arrogant master' or some d*uche trying to make trouble with him yet, although he has stopped a knife waving psycho. Who i would assume to be the female lead, while we haven't seen a lot of her yet, I feel like she's developed well and funny as well since she nicknames the MC 'saitama' due to the fact that MC is super strong and is bald. While I don't know if there will be more 'vampirical' humans besides the MC, there has been one other vampirical creature that the MC has killed and drank the blood of to grow stronger, so im interested as to where the plot will develop and how the mystery of how the MC became a vampire will get solved.
Story is good, different & intriguing. Keeps the reader interested. Although there are many grammatical errors, but still it's understandable. Keep it up ?
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I think this novel can go far I like how evolves the mc his background and even his motivation and everything I would highly recommend this novel
Absolutely love this novel so far and I am hopeful it gets picked, it has my full attention and I wouldn’t mind buying coins to spend on this novel which I rarely do but when I do I’m a dedicated fan until the end
i actually enjoyed this story. I've read most int mtl and wish it was picked up, it has a good world background and great potential. honestly i am not sure why it wasn't picked
It's literally one of the best novels I've ever read. Loved it.
I dropped this novel over the stupidity of the mc. I just can’t take it anymore and these are the reasons why . 1 he relies completely on his sister before she was taken away by a sect. 2 he can’t make a decision for himself and thinks he’s smart when he’s like a kid with down syndrome. 3 he overates his thinking capacity and make a the worst decisions, he meets a strong servant of his father named Wang you and he says his dad is not his dad over some bull**** reason like he’s being watched by someone and doesn’t know if they are friend or foe. Like he’s weak as a fly towards this guy and thinks his “enemy” wouldn’t just torture his information out of him and so he loses the support of the bai family and an eternal realm servant. Hence I’m dropping this novel over this dumbass MC.
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Quite funny and enjoyable i would love to read moreNote : It seem the MC will only take female disciples so if you don't like that it's better you don't read it
Leaving a faithful review that might hurt some set of people (clearing throat, "The haters") ; I love this book so much, would have loved to read more but my wallet is growing webs.