LordRaven
14 chapters in but contradiction after contradiction and plot holes everywhere. I was working past some grammar issues but it’s the plot that’s a mess. First they don’t know she’s a Princess then randomly in the middle of a chapter he casually says she was lycan princess. It’s a mess and a no
Please continue to write and also consider writing more stories, and even consider expanding professional and selling your books! You have a gift. I can see myself re-reading this novel multiple times way after I’m done.
this is such a great story!! what is the update schedule
Another triumph for E.S.! Great characters, vulnerable FL, broody ML, both with old scars, secrets, and regrets. Great plot development. All packed into a lovely short story. I’m only sad that I’m running out of E.S. novels to read, all of them are exceptional!
wow am loving it and looking forward to each update.
thank you my favorite Author ...
More plz u re a fantastic writer
this book deserve a read
First and foremost, I love the book cover
Very nice plot. keep it up author
Really cool ?
I’m enjoying this story - can’t wait to see what happens next. I just wish the parts in different languages were also translated to English as well beside it.
When would be the possible update of the novel?
