This is just good.
Very interesting premise, executed well, good enough grammar, only real complaint is that it's not being updated.
The main characters are interesting, and when they are together they become amazing. The whole power system is interesting and actually new enough that it's exciting. So far we haven't really gotten any of the disciples, but it's starting on that part now, as soon as the author comes back of course(please come back).
Recommend this to everyone who likes a good supernatural mystery.
Hello my dear readers hope everyone enjoys my new novel .
I started this series a while back and the beginning didn’t exactly entice me but with nothing else to read I decided to give it a second chance and I’m incredibly glad I did. The series starts off rough but by the second volume it really finds its footing and starts heating up. It’s always had strongly written characters but they really started developing towards the end of the end of the first volume and I couldn’t put it down. I see a lot of negative comments when reading but I just can’t understand them, you can really feel the love the author has for writing and the characters and that is what makes for a good novel. If you tried this series before but decided to drop it I really recommend picking it back up because you are missing out my friend.Thanks to the author for building an awesome world and writing an amazing story!
the novel is f***king great . I love the well structured way in which the author writes the novel, this should have been a five star but of course there's always room for improvement
the novel is getting beautiful day by day
So another disgusting chinese novel...
literal definition of disgusting MC...
so if you don't need brain cells then go read it...
and the plot is so much trash that you can smell it...
well for your good Don't read it if you want an intact brain...
>crazy killing Supreme blessing
>dragon city 1
>great void taboo mastet
If you told me this was auto generated by an ai, I would belive you.
It honestly baffles me how you can write this garbage, si wish fulfillment fanfics have higher protection value than this utter garbage.
Congratulations, this garbage have finally convinced me to end it all. Good luck fellow readers. Not even God can save you now
I will say this story is good.
I definitely suggest new reader to read it.
it is one of the best video game novel out there(among recently released video game novel)
old readers will enjoy it too
I hope it get picked.. not those which garbage Novel like before.
I dont even know how it is possible to associate Number1 player with a no brain mc? Even as a first story, im curious to know how author brain works?
And even if we say okay its possible to be that strong and stupid, he played so long and deleted it like « oh there is no more fries »... no sadness, no sleepless night, no tears, nothing... he just fell asleep like he had the best day of his life.
Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's only got five chapters (or four if the first chapter was a prologue) but it feels distinctive from others stories I've read. I mean,
"we can't have our own zombie apocalypse so make it on VR world so the virus won't spread into our real world."
Anyway, everything is in a good state, especially the scenes with guns and booms... if you can describe it more "gore-ly" and add more blood, it will be much better. The characters seems unique, and the AI as well.
Overall, good job.
Ago its too fun to read, it is you know at start somewhat give you sad feelings but then it is too good. Very interesting story. Author best of luck