I dont understand. Why and how is this like.... this... it...its .......its so bad and stupid that its actually good. why is this possible ? how is this possible?
Honestly, I like the plot and the characters. The grammar on the other hand is atrocious. Many words are jumbled up with Chinese and the format is also terrible. If only they proofread it and translated it better, then it would have been a good read.
Good story! Fast, coherent, protagonist isn't a closet psycho, and a spin on cultivation. And kudos to breaking out of the MC humiliates adversary and then moves on, keeping Ryan as a character was a very fresh move. And Bayer not going out of his way to crush an insect, damne, that's realism!
I'm really hoping you avoid the female cultivator cliches cold beauty that inevitably will need to be rescued in most fights.
I wouldn’t say it’s great or perfect but I guess it’s ok just not really my cup of tea tbh.
we'll all I can say is that... Its's Well Made Story. I love the characters, the Story Plot. So Author please pretty please—update this story please
Author, with all honesty, your English is horrendous. You might not realize it, but the way you write is very confusing and many words are unnecessary.
If u need me to list examples, I'll do so with a correction too. But I ignored that, since if I like a novel I'll read despite the hurdles.
As for the story, nothing really original fyi tbh.. not that it's bad, I don't mind it. But everything is way too rushed, he becomes lvl 10 when everyone is 2&1, he doesn't even struggle killing the boss announced globally, just slash and hack, no dodge, no low health.. nothing no struggle. again, lvl2 vs lvl 15! And the CEO of the gaming company is kind to him, only kind. Yes, he offered on the phone to buy him a house, cars, pets, jets, guns and the world? And he did, the most expensive too! it's like he had a son that he now remembers? and when knowing the MCs linage(warring states era's leading martial linage), he starts crying thanking God for letting him know that the one they should serve is alive??? A cult?hmm.. What is this nonsense, seriously?.. he made 2 million $ or wtv in 2/3 days? If weed knew this, he would start killing left and right, kill himself at the end, revive, kill himself again, a loop. Oh and supposedly this isn't a harem okay? Fine even better. But noo, it can't be that dream novel?? where there's no actual harem, right!!!!??Yep u guessed right. No harem. But u look right, there's a girl "oh my so hot and cool, can I have a screenshot?" Everytime. Then left, oh not surprisingly another girl?!?? "sooo rich and handsome, if only I could marry him I will forever be happy". Idk wtv doesn't suit my taste, author I hope you improve and I sincerely urge you to check up on earlier chapters every now and then and not neglect keeping them up to date with your improvement. Reached chapter 20, couldn't continue on my injured soul.. good luck!
Very nice story, I loved your plot and how you define your characters and your concept of astral realm, I really am looking forward to the progress of this story and keep on the good work.
Read till chapter 2 so far, and I can already tell the story is great! It's very entertaining since the writing quality is very good. A few error in tense but it's almost invisible to notice since it goes with the flow when it comes to reading. I also liked the fact that the author isn't aiming to win WSA, but rather to share his fantasy story to the world. So keep it up author you're doing great! And best of luck too
Finally this novel available in webnovel!!
Here we go brand new Adventure!
Liked it thus far. Funny main characters and interesting plot.
its good and so very good but still the updates is still slow and please dont be over powered characters or otherwise the story will become so boring