This novel sucks big time. Just way too dragging of one small plot and bot making sense of anything. Sometimes MC is like a fucking GOD and next he is just lamb to be slaughter and out pf nowhere he is GOD to but WAIT thats only infront of people who are noob and mortal otherwise he is just ready to be slaughter lamb.
I don't like the ML sooooOoo ******* ,no loyalty ,dishonest .etc... ( even thought in real life is hard to find a forever .. I want to read novel that has Forever )
The story is solidly written. With a sharp/calm MC but can still be influence by his hot bloodedness sometimes. good side characters. World background is generally established.
In the 40 chapters that I read, most chapters revolve on spies and stuffs, which in my opinion is well written and has properly established who are possible plots and future hindrances for the MC in his journey. Power system is complicated hopefully future chapters will clarify some possible loopholes that might arise if such complex system is not regulated.
Thankfully this novel is added as eastern fantasy and not sci-fi. Most sci-fi books here just uses sciency terms just to sound sci fi but actually just another eastern fantasy genre. At least this book is honest.
This author stole everything in warlock from the magus world from The Wizard World, then later on in the gods world arc stole from Night Ranger. Wmw's ending was rushed because he didn't find content to steal from anymore. I started reading this story with apprehension, but i can already see things from Night Ranger in the first chapter. The author's name is "The plagiarist" for a good reason after all. (Before anyone says anything, the author himself admitted to stealing from others. Check it out)
It seems like comedy.
It feels like comedy.
It should be comedy.
It will be comedy,
therefore the comedy shall come
and be voted for.
be praised for comedy
Please change the translator this cool novel is getting butchered by novelsaga,the last translator even if he was slow he did a good job and he didnt get paid at all.
I thought that this story had some potential so I gave it a go. Managed to struggle to the middle of Chapter 12 before giving up. Main reasons for this 1) Stupid names for moves that make no sense and do not keep with the theme. 2) Power system is all mangled up and illogical. The MC struggles to power up and relearn things he had already learnt in his previous world. Why does it take so long to do something you already understand? Makes no sense. 3) Translation quality and editing could use some work. While I am not someone who normally complains, the some sentences leaves me wondering if I am trying to decipher a scrambled code. 4) Minor complaint - the story obviously was published on other platforms as it was not optimised for WN, in that it has font codes that are not deleted still in the chapters.
Enjoyable story so far. I like the mc and how confident he is. It's very satisfying to read about the battles he's engaged in. I am excited to see what happens next.
Thanks translator and editor for your hard work. I will keep reading.
Dropping this to make it the 10th review!
I actually have no idea what to write here since I think whatever I write is going to be subject to author's bias, making it not too believable.
But if there are any obvious mistakes that I made, feel free to reply here as well since there are no alerts for comments in chapters.
Hopefully you guys enjoy the story!
if we exclude main character,this trash is somhow readable.MC character is worst.up until i have read,he is a scum and no dignity.ASSAULTING woman like its his right.as for story,up untill now there is no plot or anything.just let heroine go,do mission and assault.
Good story highly recommend for people who love game element but no recommend for those who love harem. It this story great yes for me. /Sike -_-/heeee exp
Pretty interesting.Ahh..I can't stop myself turning to next chapter. I feel as if I am the one in the game. It's the first game novel I find simple to understand and exciting to read. More than complete quest=earn money=level up. And the development of the story and world building is just perfect.