to be fair i have not yet read it but just seeing the tags makes me not wanna read it XD like some of these tags alone ruin my reading experience but all of them together doesnt even make me mad it just seems like a masssive joke to me XD
The story initially had a promising start, but my expectations were dashed as it evolved. The main character's dialogue became increasingly grating, bordering on annoyance, and repetitive. Initially, his descriptions of children and wives as "adorable" and "cute" were endearing, but they became overused to the point of distraction. In the first hundred chapters, the story was decent, but as the MC began assisting the neighboring country, his constant emphasis on owing the king and governor felt illogical and foolish.
When the dragon convinced him to marry the heroine, the narrative shifted, making it seem like the story was now centered around their romance, with other characters reduced to supporting roles. Lefi, the dragon, was underutilized, which left me feeling disappointed. The MC's excessive help to the hero and the country made him appear biased, even considering going to war for them. Giving teleport necklaces to certain characters like Charlotte without any real purpose further detracted from the plot.
There's a sense of filler content, with many unnecessary details that detract from the story's quality. The hero's excessive focus takes center stage, and other characters feel like mere peripherals. It seems like the author is forcing the MC and hero together, rather than allowing them to develop organically.
I sincerely hope the story takes a turn for the better, perhaps with a surprising revelation that the hero's actions are driven by her country's needs rather than genuine affection for the MC. Characters need to behave logically and according to the situation, not just for the sake of fan service or clichéd storytelling. A well-executed twist could breathe new life into this series, moving beyond a generic harem story with a one-dimensional hero.
Frrr, that dawg almost making me blush too god dayum
Why's it not there is it trash
What should be removed?
What is the name of second book?
Great book, writing quality is 5.0. You are going to be a great writer, try updating daily you will surely see the results
hi, this is a shameless 5 star review from the author, hope yall enjoy the story!
From what I read, the plot and the world building is a mess. The plot armor is too obvious and will suddenly appear here and there. And I got the feeling of slow yet fast pace. As for the reason is because the exp needed to level up is astronomical which made it slow therefore the MC is constantly speedrunning many "Hidden" Quest which made it fast and a mess of the story.As for the MC? He didn't give me a feeling of being an experience and supposedly one of the "Top players" that fought a God.4/10 Just your average Junkfood Novel.
soooooooo good but mr lost world when will you post another chapter
What can I say? this is a-m-a-z-i-n-g mate. Simply amazing. First of all, I loved the fact that author-nim put character information for the main couple and a couple of villains. It helped me a lot lol. To begin with, I love the theme of the story, involving a villainess who suffers like hell because of the 'saintess', and then she got back in time and change everything. The way author-nim wrote it is amazing like I've said. She knows how to explain her pain, her thoughts, and the personality of the people around her. When Nat got back... bruh it's amazing. I also laughed a lot cuz it's funny. I'm hella anxious to see the male lead cuz I'm freaking out with theories about him out here LOL... also, it's still a new novel, with only a few chapters until now, but in my opinion, it has a very huge potential. I'm looking forward to see where this amazing story will go. Keep it going, author-nim, cupz I'll keep it reading here.
(Completed)How many chapters?