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satiesfier, i think this book isn't horor. but i'm wrong this book tell about the man who marry with the demons. really i can't image it.
"Ultimate Military System" presents a compelling narrative with promising potential. The storyline is engaging, delving into the intricacies of a powerful military system. The author skillfully weaves elements of suspense and strategy, keeping readers hooked. However, there is room for further character development to enhance the overall depth of the novel. With a solid foundation, the story has the potential to evolve into a captivating military thriller.
i just want more updates, and also I can't wait to see the character reference displayed here in the app, the original ones you shared in discord were so cool.
The book is decent but the main frustrating thing is the MC is subpar. He causes the reader to get frustrated because he repeatedly falls for simple traps. Over, and over, and over, and then over again. He knows what will happen in the future, he knows who the villains are, and when the invite him to leave the sect or offer him a "gift" he always accepts, falls for the trap, and ends up in a bad situation. This feels super forced.
Completely worth reading..its kinda epic
finally found something worthwhile to read it has a lot of potential and I hope author will complete the novel
Meh i guess i dislike the system, like the whole flirting thing made no sense. How is getting punished flirting...
The characters are super basic, the mc seems to have no personality, as the system will craft him into a possible simp. And all hes been doinf is obsessing over this one girl ...
i dialike the female leads character.I dislike her as a person, for beinf a basic bit.ch. And the fact that ahe cant deal with such a little loss... But whats worse is that the character herself just feels like it gonna be used to push the mc in a certain. Direction and eventually make him fall in love or some cliche bs.
The teacher ia pretty bad clearly she doeant know how to teach. My opinion of course. But i can already see the author gonna trick us into thinking she is a good person by saying oml she ia still teaching even though ahe had surgery. A broken boomer ia still a boomer. She can be a great person but she ia still a horrible teacher.
I can see thia book consisting in just many many conaidiences with forced comedy that realistically would never happen, and ita slightly ironic. The author can give us questions that need "logic" but he isnt clever enough to give actual unique characters and unique interactions and settings, its instead incredibly cliche and basic.
Oh yeah why was watching videos not relaxing... Idnt understand, if ur an introvert all that flirting would do is tire u out. Especially someome like him who has never done it. Like i said the system makes no sense and will just be a plot device to force the mc into dumb plota because the author isnt creative enough to make the character fall into that setting naturally.
The story is a mishmash of all the good things a normal Xianxia reader likes. Some of the tropes like face slapping, power imbalance and way too overpowered Mc with looks that could kill anyone and nigh-omnipotence. The story is character centred and simple plots that have easy resolutions.
The story is suitable for consumption as a daily dose, but not binge reading.
I do not want to comment on the negatives but encourage people just giving it a chance and then decide if it's you're cup of tea.
So I'm thinking, you're going to kill the main character, aren't you? I've read something similar, but it's a dead God, not a God of undead. And it ended sadly! (the truth is that such a character CAN't live! Such an evil, paranoid, hateful person cannot exist in the world for long. The very essence does not allow)
First of all, that was a refreshing introduction. A lot of readers know about VR game and it would be good to read another work of a potential star