The story is good so far. Interesting plot. Only the grammar is abit confusing. Just abit but i still can understand it. I can’t comment to much im just a reader n i just read 2 chapter.. keep up the good work. Btw im a dude n kind of enjoy this kind of story. Just the original... is it really there? I mean... existed?
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The story is really good! I love how Sage always looks after his mom and tries to find a way to save her! I hope she will one day wake up and make him happy! And the game theme is the best too! I love it and would recommend it to everyone!
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You got all my stones for the day, Keep going!As a review for readers... I read a lot. This interests me. I think the story has a unique flow that reminds me of maybe only one other thing I've read, and even that only due to some similarity in tone. I'm enjoying the different pressures on the MC and his work to orient himself. I think the side characters could stand to be a bit deeper, as they've switched out quickly so far. That said there has been some reason to do so, and what we do see of them is relatively solid, though stereotypical at times. A bit of cringe when the woman is overtaken by her maternal instincts as her brother acts as a cold young master. The main worry I have for the novel as it progresses is how/if it will form a deeper plot beyond the current motivation of "growing to survive". However, that is a common issue and this story has a decent foundation to build something good. You can see the author playing with different narrative tricks at different points, which is fun in itself. Overall, it will be fun to watch both this author and the story grow. Its on my primary reading list, and I invited other readers to do the same.
Beautifully written i have to start of with that! From the synopsis to the story to the characters, Simply amazing. I’m not really a fan of fantasy but your story captivated me! Well done author!
I can say that I am in love with the story. How everything and everyone just go with the flow. I have to say that Sprat my fave character and that he deserve love and protection.Also, love the naming sense of the author. Good work, keep going !
well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
The princess's personality seems full of potential. The element of mystery is strong around the story setting. The most addictive thing is the prospects of dragon and pheonix interaction....can't wait to see how the things would be developing further.
A very good story with interesting twists and not completely predictable story. Also, mc is quite intelligent and not some stupid 'hero' type character. Please don't make mc into an idiot in the future, make him pragmatic/ruthless when necessary.
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