Overall good read. I enjoyed the novel so far and i'm currently looking forward for the future. I'll definitely be keeping my eyes on this one.But there is a word count. so yeahh...
The initial idea is actually quite good. For the first couple of chapters, I really thought I finally would read something more than a collection of stale cliché. Then a few more chapters on, it becomes apparent that the execution of the idea hasn't lived up to the idea itself. The MC character, despite having greater intelligence than average, seems to lack quite a bit of brain cells. This may seem paradoxical, but the mystery in the setting lacks the thorough background and hints that makes the mystery in Lord of Mysteries so interesting. What a pity.
This story is starting off normal and ok. The plot seems easy to understand right now. The characters all seem to have unique designs And as of right now the world in this story is getting slowly built I think.
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great story and thank you for novel .
Mre chapters please, cant wait to see what happened.. This will be my next favourite book in my library list. Hope there will be no over do to the mc.
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the story is promising but the translation quality has dropped considerably passed the first 30 so chapters. world building is scarce at the moment but still good enough.
nice story i really like its pretty interesting so i hope u dont drop it ................... ... .. .. .. . .. ... .. .. .
*Review copied from old version of this novel*Absolutely loving the build up and background. The characters are cool and the directions the story is going, so far, feels right. Keep up the awesome work. The New World is exciting. Wish it was for real. Lol. Can't wait for more stuff soon.
All new Translations are MTL and even the name of the MC is not consistent. Sad but can't read this anymore.Try some other novels than wasting time on this MTL piece of ****.